IceDragon64's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Little Match Girl]

Beautiful

It is good looking and the music is very good.

the animation is limited and the figures are not all that impressive, but the backgrounds and scenery are wonderful with all the shop signs and the details in the church etc.
The music and sound is well chosen and in perfect timing.

there are a few details I would like you to consider-
-the music stops very abruptly as she reaches the church.
-make the tears in church a little more subtle, paler blue, not welling up over the whole eye.
-make the choir mouth movement better, you don't need full lip sync, but something closer would be much better- the church scene is otherwise so good the silly mouths spoil it.

Well done, thank you

RegisCartoons responds:

Thanks for noticing the details and for the useful advices ~

[LL: spam attack!]

Its funny

Yeah, I laughed a bit

Nice credits, but far too slow. As a reviewer I read and look at everything in a submission, but I was tempted to switch off before the end.

The Dragon/Spirit Alliance is Ock neutral, we vote/review only on merit.

smackhouse responds:

thanks that helps a lot :D

[Nocturne in G Minor]

Ok stuff

Weird- of course!

Some interesting images. It had a bit of class to it.
Nice music, some atmosphere.

I liked the (rare) use of hands in the first scene it added something to the bottles moment of character.

limited animation, sort of story, but didn't make much sense.

Please put in credits.

The Dragon/Spirit Alliance is Ock neutral, we vote/review only on merit.

Silvercherryclock responds:

Proud of it.

Thanks.

It seemed like it would add to the movie if he placed a hand on the altar.

There is a plot to each separate story, but many people just can't decipher movies like this.

There wasn't really a need to. I made everything except the gun and music.

That's better than hating the clock crew, I respect that.

[The Hammerthrow 5]

Yaaaaaay!

You did it! You did it! You made the smash camera scene like I asked you to! You didn't 'improve' the style either-

You go on my favourite list for that, along with this movie and I will tell the other Dragons and Spirits to see it.

Lots of sports still to do-
-backstroke swimmer hits the end (I'm always afraid of that)
-snooker player (give him a bow tie!) pokes or gets poked.
-fencing (proper mask etc on top of usual scribble!)
-table tennis player- maybe opponants bat in his mouth?
-sailing/rowing/canoeing
-horseriding
Don't take away what you have- the style is cult status now, but try to add whatever you can to build on it and keep new originality- the best sounds you can find (maybe faint 'announcer'/ commentator sounds. Maybe an ambulance scene outside a stadium (where the curler goes by!).
Put credit scene in (with button gets more interact. point), please?

Muskelchock responds:

Yaaaay, i was going to put down hammerthrow 6, but when i saw your review i am gonna finish it. Its gonna be much longer this time i hope. At least smoother frame by frame animation and better loops, Mayby the characters is going to have eyes, what do you think. Im an on to to basketball. If you have any ideas mail me at [e-mail] . Thanks for the good review

[A FLASH ABOUT TREES!!111!]

OK stuff

Despite being very messy, to the point that it was very hard to make out what was going on, it had story, humour, scenes, background, ideas, intro, ending, message etc. so I liked it.

I liked the sounds and some of the detail- Bond theme, scope sight etc.

Try getting your friends to look at stuff before you submit it. If it doesn't make sense to them, it won't to us. You sensibly gave us authors notes to read, but to be frank without them I'm not sure I would have known what was going on.

You definately have ability, may I suggest you collaborate a bit to make the most of it

Ying-yong responds:

OK. Thank you for your helpful review. It'll be helpful next time I make a film.

[Clockmas Peace]

Well done...

...for waiting until you had the replay button working. I know how hard it is to have patience. I am dying to submit my first Flash!

this flash doesn't have much actual animation- in that sense there isn't much to it. However, the intro looked good, everything else was OK and I liked the message.

The Dragon/Spirit Alliance is Clock neutral- we only review on quality.

Merry Christmas to the Clock Crew and the other Ocks etc. from the Dragon/Spirit Alliance

KennyKicksAss responds:

Merry Clockmas <3

[Santa's A Cunt]

Its got skill but...

i can't give a proper review or score to a submission with the c word in the title, viewable to all the look at the site.

Gaizka responds:

I'm speechless, I mean, are you a moron? You can't review my movie beacuse it has 'Cunt' in the title? Are you simple?

Also, you have achieved nothing. You say you can't give me a proper review... but this IS a review, so why didn't you review it properly? Also, your sentence makes no sense so I don't understand what you're on about.

AND WHY HAVE YOU GIVEN ME GOOD INDIVIDUAL SCORES, BUT A ZERO OVERALL?! Get a grip you clown!

[Lost Robot]

Good stuff

Good graphics, nice details, not all that much animation, but I liked the backgrounds.
Nice, appropriate music

Sorry to be pedantic, but please put that spelling right- boiling, not bioling ash, it really spoils otherwise good text.

icaforp responds:

Thanks for the good review. I will change the text thank you for pointing that out! I apologize to everyone for my poor spelling.

[BB: Paper Samurai]

Good Mickey take

Nice action, liked the re-appearing pencil. the weird semi-storyline is very ock.

Music appropriate, would have been better with a few sounds, otherwise, it was everything it should be.

The Dragon/Spirit Alliance is ock neutral and votes only on merit.

Paper-Samurai responds:

Well, thank you for your kind review!

[Ministix]

not too bad

For a whizzy scribble

Sheepeasy responds:

You know what pisses me off? When people who don't animate feel the need to comment on people's style of animating- so before you start giving this a 2 and complaining it's too scribbly; why don't you just piss off and get a copy of flash you neoyuppie scum bag!