Well done for owning up!
i trust you will be making some good stuff to make up for this!
Well done for owning up!
i trust you will be making some good stuff to make up for this!
i learned a lot since i submitted that thing. right now ive just been fooling with flash to impress some easily impressed friends of mine.
A bit funny, but...
...with no effort in graphics and virtually no animation it doesn't do it for me as a Flash.
I don't much like this whole begging for votes/review score thing.
Dragons & Spirits are Ock neutral and vote only on merit.
PS. I did find the footnote on your Authors Notes funny!
Huh? whos begging for votes? and reviews...lol begging is getting on your knees and saying PLEASE SPARE ME 10p GOD BLESS YOU over and over... k thnkx
Weird
Didn't make much sense to me. I assume you have to know this character.
Yes, alot of my movies feature him.
borderline
i did find it funny and novel. It looked OK and I nearly protected it just to show my friends.
I guess the F Off message put me off a bit, I'm pretty square, plus the Vote Five thing gets on my nerves.
Dragons & Spirits are Ock neutral and vote on Merit only
vote fiveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Funny!
I liked it!
Weird images, looked like fun. Looks like a lot of families I know!
Some bits were a little slow; timing is very difficult, I mess about with frames for hours, only to change my mind the next time I look at one of my Flashes.
You certainly had a bit of length in this one. So far I have only seen your Baz and I thought I would check out your other stuff. Your sure can Flash.
well thx
OK stuff, funny
Yes, I have just seen 4, now I watched 3. This one is somehow much funnier, in my opinion. I think it is just the ridiculous plot.
I checked the times. This one seems longer, but is about the same length as 4. I think it is the scene changes, it makes it seem like there is much more to it.
I liked the symbolic depiction of the bag going into the plane (although I know it was just a lazy tween really!)
I didn't like the uneccesary advert for Virgin Trains, I just found it grates a little, somehow. I look forward to the movie.
lol thanks
OK
+Sound is OK, somehow just right music and OK FX
+OK graphics & animation. Flame looked quite good, better than a lot on NG.
-Not actually that funny. Perhaps you could use the device you used in Baz 2. Make his eyes blink once(white on black good contrasting moment) to emphasise that he somehow survives until the roof falls on him.
I just had an idea. Maybe at the end of each one you could put in a bit of safety info, such as a website reference appropriate to each one- just an idea- a 'professional' touch?
lol snazzy idea
OK
I preferred this to Baz 1. It had just a little more to it.
I liked the skeleton look.
and the replay worked today!
Keep up the series. I suggest you move on to small groups of sketches. Take a look at the Hammerthrow series by Muskelchock. He clearly gets less stick now he dishes out his episodes in batches of small sketches.
Polite Point-
Just because one of us hasn't got any Flashes to our name does not disqualify us from reviewing and voting on Flashes. If that was what Tom wanted he would make it so. In fact, I suggest that our opinion is valuable in a different way, since we are not wrapped up in how it was made, but we think mostly about what it actually looks like etc.
thank you and thanks again for your advice
OK
More effort went into all the fancy intro and stuff than the cartoon itself. It all looked great, but it was a dissappointment to just have one short sketch.
the replay button didn't work for me, I tried it twice round.
The sketch itself was OK.
The Authors Notes made me hope for more.
the script was a bit dodgy it will be sorted out in the next sketch.
Was in the Dragon & Spirit Alliance. My DS Halloween & Christmas Quizzes are in the 2006 Collections. I was the main organiser on Wikigrounds, though I don't spend much time either there or here these days. I was a writer in the Monthly Writing and VACcom
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