IceDragon64's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Stop & Stare...]

Nice and smooth

Nice style, content, message. Hope Carly is OK now.

Ticketyt0ck responds:

Thanks for the review.

[How airsoft guns work]

Needs sound, badly

Otherwise OK. More info would be good.

tsa1 responds:

you know, an airsoft gun doesn't say mutch of a sound, it would look clumsy if i had to but a little stupid sound in to each shot firedm then i think it is better to keep it clean.

[Not Anymore.....]

Not too bad

It s got most of the basics- sound, animation, background etc. However, it is mostly of poor quality and there isn't much to it.

The sound is very rough and hard to hear. You need to practice and redo voices until they are clearer.

The intro thing is very basic, b/w stickmen is SO overdone and common.

I think you have the beginnings of something good, but you are not, in my opinion, ready for submitting to NG.
Please do work on it.

Tolu910 responds:

thanks for the help. ill do better

[The Weapon Collab]

Some nice touches

I 'm not much into stickmen and guns, but I liked the bits of humour and the info.

sirtom93 responds:

Thanks.

[Black Sundown]

interesting, skilful

Very good art, good animation. Good sound and music.

It would, of course be much better with voices. It is difficult to follow the story through only sub-titles, especially since the punctuation is not that clear, which makes it difficult to follow and the right hand side fades to dark so the words dissappear.
I didn't entirely follow the story, I think you have it clear in your head, as you explained in the notes, but we should not need the notes to understand it.
For example, the idea of the General and this vengeance arrives from nowhere at the end of the story.
I think you need to work with some more people who DON'T know what is going on as beta testers before submitting.
Its good work. Work on it. I look forward to the sequel

Kumar responds:

yeah it is another thing I'm working on hopefully for the next episode it can go a little slower pace and of course voice acting to add extra animation to it less tweens. That way the vengeance plot will go noticed from frame one.

[New Super Mario Bloopers]

Not much to it.

Three is not much in a set of bloopers, especially Mario bloopers which are two-a -penny anyway. I didn't understand the first one at all and the third was pretty unexciting. that left only the middle one, which was not bad, but could probabbly have used a funnier sound associated with the slide down.
Still, it all worked OK, I suppose, tho the sound wasn't great, as you said. Sorry I can't help you with that.

Nickclick2 responds:

The first one was, you know how E Gadd is a Nerd? Well now, he was a gangster.

[LSCCE]

well yes

its all very good of its type. Stickmen fighting- some good ideas and images; all done properly, I suppose.

Can't say I am very excited about seeing stick men fighting, tho- The better ones usually have some hint of plot, zoom-in or personality in there.

Ace0fredspades responds:

aaaaha

[Rita's Ship]

Looks pretty good

As an animation, it doesn't do all that much and there isn't much of what you could call story or personality- it could be said that this is just a little bit of a test/preview or whatever and belongs in the Alphas.
However, it looks good enough, its fairly original and its got good, appropriate music.
Why is the background red? Is it just so that the black ship shows up more?
It might look more menacing if it didn't show up quite so well, maybe a darker background. Perhaps a dark grey background with reddish coloured gas swirls in it.

The credits could do with being a little less bland. - Perhaps more colourful or something. You could put links in it, such as a link to the music credits

NapalmGirl responds:

I liked the red background. Red and black are my fav colorz! ^_^ Plus the red did seem like a good color that would make the ship show up better. Plus it made it seem more ebil as well. The idea about grey might be okay...Dunno if it might be as striking as the red. Gas swirls seem like a neat idea too. Yeah I gotta fix teh credits. Gomen.

[The Fairy Future Mother]

Very Good

Of course I love watching my own basic idea appear (and get praise) but I like all the things that you have done to it- the voices,the story twist, the details:
The mouse, the rolling eyes
"...Horrible vision of the future..." ha ha ha!
The familiar pictures on the wall

I like the blue sky background in the egg catapult scene. It made much more sense- I was vaguely unhappy about it before, but couldn't put it into words.

Now its really good. If you can always make at least this standard for any stories of mine you use, you can do as many as you like!

All that remains is to make the movement more fluid generally and we are really on the way.

OxSox responds:

Hahaha that's my favorite part too!

[: L Gets Mad :]

Not too bad

In fact , for a first time its got quite a bit of potential.
the art was good enough and the style was OK.
However, not much gets through without sound, the animation was adequate but not inspiring and the whole thing makes not much sense if one has not heard of the show.

I would support this if it at least had sound. If you need help PM me. You have potential.
Best Wishes
Ice

Kero-the-boy-killer responds:

Yea, sound does indeed make it have more quality. But thank you for advice ^^