weird
kinda funny. Please do translate. I couldn't really follow it.
weird
kinda funny. Please do translate. I couldn't really follow it.
ok, thanks for the review i'll translate it :D
Not animation
Therefore doesn't belong here. Dissapointingly boring. Against Toms stated requirements for a submission.
Says the guy with a bunch of shitty submissions
So so
Its basic Ock stuff. dull. Only the easter egg just about saves it.
I agree. The easter egg is awesome.
borderline
its pretty basic and scribbly, but its got the basics, its topical and its vaguely funny.
Credits?
Thanks im pretty new to animating so thanks
work in progress?
I can see that these horses look quite good and they have nice limbs for you to make something with. They clearly have potential, but what you have actually created has no appeal to me at all. Basically it looks like you are just experimenting with something and what we see here is not, in my opinion at all ready to be submitted as a complete submission for our entertainment and judgement.
Needs background, story, sortiing out movement into something smooth and realistic.
Sorry, it was complete and nice, but when I was exporting it into a Flash, It glitched hard-core........
great message!
put across very simply! Looks OK.
thanks for the review! :D
Pretty Good
I decided to come and find out a bit about you. I will study your work more. The images were good. Good atmosphere. bomb cloud could have been better.
Yeah, clouds are something I'm not that great at.
very good
Very neatly done etc but not very original. It does take 'stickman escaping tetris blocks' a bit further, but not that much. No real story to it, nothing to give personality or make the viewer care what happens much. I know this kind of thing takes a lot of work, but its a long way away from "excellant- 5/5 10/10" to me.
Zooming in on a face, for example, looking up at the falling blocks, with a drop of sweat, would make a LOT of difference to the sense of story and meaning.
I like that last suggestion.
simple and effective!
It does the job and its a job that should be done :)
Thanks :)
Was in the Dragon & Spirit Alliance. My DS Halloween & Christmas Quizzes are in the 2006 Collections. I am the main organiser on Wikigrounds, though I don't spend much time either there or here these days. I am a writer in the Monthly Writing and VACcomps
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