I like it!
At first I thought it was going to be crap becuase of the pic quality vs the filesize. I thought it would be a long music track with scribble and no redeeming features. However, as the music was well timed and themed, I didn't have a problem with it.
However, if you can trim the filesize down without loss of quality, please do so, over 7M for a simple story is rather a lot.
The story developed a bit and I enjoyed the style. The animation and art is simple, but it does the job. The sound is good enough and the VA is also good. I am glad you took the trouble to subtitle though, as it would otherwise be hard to follow.
The storyline is random, but on NG, that's fine!
Its quite funny- not a barrel of laughs, but it made me smile. If you want english voices, contact me- my Crew. the Dragons & Spirits, can provide them.