Not bad
fun, sweet. Nice present. Hope she liked it!
Looked OK, sounded OK. I am not a great lover of sprite movies but this was well enough executed and I do like proper credits.
Nothing I would particularly change
Not bad
fun, sweet. Nice present. Hope she liked it!
Looked OK, sounded OK. I am not a great lover of sprite movies but this was well enough executed and I do like proper credits.
Nothing I would particularly change
Thanks for your honest opinion.
I was SO going to blam this...
... but then I thought it was kinda cute and creative.
I like the whole idea. Hope you do more with these characters.
Haha, thanks! X3 The Hatgirl is me so I'll definitely do more with her ^_^ and if Raccoon does more stuff with me for school he'll be back too! Thanks for your kindness : D
simple
Not very much to it, but what there is is OK. Its got sound, animation, a moment of story, a replay button- whats not to like?
The tiny animation is actually OK and the sounds are OK. I hope you will go on to produce stuff which is a little more engaging and absorbing, but for now, 4/10 is a reasonable start (better than my first!)
i did not understand what you just said but i think that what you said was a complement :)
Not too bad
It is very hard to follow at that speed, and of course, it is a shaggy dog story, so it wasn't worth following, but hey, its a Clockday sub and it could be a lot worse.
If it had pix about the story and/or subtitles, I would have rated it higher.
Thanks.
I could've lowered the speed, but I thought the audio track was long enough already. Subtitles might have been a good idea, but I honestly didn't feel like putting that much effort into it :p It's only a silly clock day flash.
dissappointing
As a Dragon & Spirit I must welcome the Lugers to Newgrounds, but I hope this intro without a movie is not going to be typical of what you do. If you can put together this kind of work, why not make something good to go with it?
Story, humour, background, music, credits...
We always vote honestly, with no regard to which crew you are. Unfortunately, that is not in your favour this time. I cannot give you any stars for your entertaining intro, since, without a movie after it, it is against Toms rules for submission. Hope to see something good from you in the future.
Best Wishes from the Dragons & Spirits
thank you
Fun!
crazy and weird story. Some good gags in it. Thank God for the subs as I couldn't otherwise hear all the dialogue. I tried to watch it on U-Tube, but it kept jamming halfway through. At least here I see it though, but the Qual is not as good- it is hard to see sometimes.
The music is great!
Thanks, check out some of my other stuff please
Was in the Dragon & Spirit Alliance. My DS Halloween & Christmas Quizzes are in the 2006 Collections. I was the main organiser on Wikigrounds, though I don't spend much time either there or here these days. I was a writer in the Monthly Writing and VACcom
Age 60, Male
Writer
London, UK
Joined on 9/29/05