IceDragon64's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Jobber short.]

vaguely interesting

It kinda works, though it doesn't make much sense. I assume you are just trying out things you can do. As an exercise in your abilities, I imagine you might be quite satisfied, but as something for an oursider to watch, it comes across to me as fairly pointless. I keep expecting something to happen, to follow as consequence and it doesn't.

Replay button is a Newgrounds essential and SO easy. You will want people to be encouraged to replay your work and explore it; to see the subtle things they may have missed first time, so make a big bold inviting replay button every time!

dangerteeth responds:

I was mostly just throwing things in there that were required for the assignment. I had a much more cohesive idea, but figuring out a walk cycle and using the bone tool for the first time got the better part of my time. Haven't learned the code for a replay button yet but when I do I'll be sure to include it. For now I guess F5 will have to do.
Thanks for the feedback!

[16 Stars (B-Day Present)]

Not bad

fun, sweet. Nice present. Hope she liked it!

Looked OK, sounded OK. I am not a great lover of sprite movies but this was well enough executed and I do like proper credits.

Nothing I would particularly change

ifureadthisdie responds:

Thanks for your honest opinion.

[Raccoon and Hatgirl]

I was SO going to blam this...

... but then I thought it was kinda cute and creative.

I like the whole idea. Hope you do more with these characters.

TGCRed responds:

Haha, thanks! X3 The Hatgirl is me so I'll definitely do more with her ^_^ and if Raccoon does more stuff with me for school he'll be back too! Thanks for your kindness : D

[The Evil Box]

simple

Not very much to it, but what there is is OK. Its got sound, animation, a moment of story, a replay button- whats not to like?

The tiny animation is actually OK and the sounds are OK. I hope you will go on to produce stuff which is a little more engaging and absorbing, but for now, 4/10 is a reasonable start (better than my first!)

Nova1Duke responds:

i did not understand what you just said but i think that what you said was a complement :)

[Orange tells a joke]

Not too bad

It is very hard to follow at that speed, and of course, it is a shaggy dog story, so it wasn't worth following, but hey, its a Clockday sub and it could be a lot worse.

If it had pix about the story and/or subtitles, I would have rated it higher.

Auz responds:

Thanks.

I could've lowered the speed, but I thought the audio track was long enough already. Subtitles might have been a good idea, but I honestly didn't feel like putting that much effort into it :p It's only a silly clock day flash.

[Luger - Time Trials #1]

dissappointing

As a Dragon & Spirit I must welcome the Lugers to Newgrounds, but I hope this intro without a movie is not going to be typical of what you do. If you can put together this kind of work, why not make something good to go with it?
Story, humour, background, music, credits...
We always vote honestly, with no regard to which crew you are. Unfortunately, that is not in your favour this time. I cannot give you any stars for your entertaining intro, since, without a movie after it, it is against Toms rules for submission. Hope to see something good from you in the future.
Best Wishes from the Dragons & Spirits

LugerLeague responds:

thank you