OK sound/music. Story told OK visually. Mildly funny. Needs some kind of credits- its a GOOD song- tell people its your song !
OK sound/music. Story told OK visually. Mildly funny. Needs some kind of credits- its a GOOD song- tell people its your song !
Itβs my song
Pretty and fun for a while, then it just repeated, Looks like a game.
Thanks IceDragon64 for the feedback. Will try to reduce the repetition.
After initially thinking I don't understand the story and feeling it was just messy and pointless, I bit of worthy length gave me time to get into it and appreciate it a bit. It was quite fun and interesting. If there was a story, I didn't understand it, but that didn't seem to matter too much. :)
Thank you so much! Sometimes I like to try and make stories that are so ambiguous that you could essentially interpret them in many different / multiple ways :D
Oh gosh, my honest vote lifted an LR movie !
Yeah, its OK, I like the moving in and out of focus effect.
I think I enjoyed making this, but I can't remember.
Clockbay- like it. Hard to hear, but its OK, slight smile.
I'm not very good at making TTS very understable, that's why I shove on subtitles! Clockbay is where I get all my stuff.
Nice work. Its quite a neat parody and it is mildly funny. I do feel that Foamy is a bit effortless and not that funny any more, so I relate to this.
Even more effortless when it's just reuploads of old content!
Hard to follow, but obviously a remarkable amount of effort for a Crew sub. I note all the traditional characteristics are all in there somewhere - when she says every bullet must count I smile and wait for them to be randomly wasted!
... right through to SBC wanting to drive :)
Best wishes to all the Clock Crew from the Dragons & Spirits
I assure you, all 5 of those shots counted. That guy had horrible musical taste.
All boxes ticked. Humour, art, animation, information, music, voices I can hear. Pretty good. Nothing in particular I would change.
Makes me want to look up blue jays. I assume they are corvids- always interesting and intelligent birds.
Appreciate it, i wanna keep improving on all the boxes you mentioned, thankfully there's many more birbs to get practice with π¦ππ¦π¦π§π¦’π¦
Stick men with minimal sound? Ima gonna bla... wait a minute, this is OK. Yeah, its reasonable, its got some wit to it I could give it 2.5... Oh, its all about a stickman fight- boring- Oh, stopped time. Nice one. 3/5 :)
Lol thanks dude XD
Was in the Dragon & Spirit Alliance. My DS Halloween & Christmas Quizzes are in the 2006 Collections. I was the main organiser on Wikigrounds, though I don't spend much time either there or here these days. I was a writer in the Monthly Writing and VACcom
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