Nothing to it really. Very simple; no reason to want to keep it. OK quality.
Nothing to it really. Very simple; no reason to want to keep it. OK quality.
Thanks for the review
It is barely an animation at all, but you have done the best you can to develop it into something to watch through the video, using the zoom effectively to show the incredible detail of the picture and the sketching as well, which successfully adds interest and motion.
I rarely give as high as 6/10 for something which is basically a picture, but you have shown how appropriate good music etc, can make such a video worth watching.
As for the picture itself, I congratulate the artist. Such action and such detail !
Slightly let down IMO by the archer who doesn't really look like she is actually in a battle at all, unlike her comrades. Perhaps you were intending her to be aloof from the battle etc, but if so, I think that went a bit too far. May I suggest watching archery in motion. Too many films show people, especially women, flicking off arrows like it was effortless. Piercing the enemy for such a slight person would be a real strain, an effort; every moment would be shooting, then straight on to the next arrow, desperately trying to take the monster down before too late.
Her stance also looks a little odd. I don't see how one can bend one leg that much without the other, whilst standing straight-try it!
Thanks a lot for the review! Really appreciate the in-depth comments.
Very hard to the hear what the mug is saying, otherwise OK. OK art, lip sync etc.
thanks, i will work on improving my sound quality
+ Nice stuff, looked good, smooth transitions, a bit of fun.
- No music credit
Thank you!
I'm sorry about the lack of music credits. It's mainly because I also made the music.
It looks very good, sounds ok- animation spot on. I would have chosen a greater contrast in dance style between 1 and 3, which to me seem similar; there are just so many dance styles out there.
Dance on :)
I did this for a intro of a dance competition and thanks sir for your precious feedback
Enjoyed this a lot. I think quite a few people will not realise there is more to it than the two basic cycles. There is, in fact a lot going on and I was happy to have the chance, as the scenes rolled round, to take it all in. It was a while before I was quite sure I was back to the beginning!
Very good art and animation, with simple humour, perfectly matched to nice music.
Thank you very much IceDragon!
OK there is very little to it, but what there is is just about OK, plus it reminds me of my own animation- Ibby's Hair Restorer. Its got sound, animation and a scrap of humour, so OK.
I agree lol, it was originally thrown together for YouTube. I normally use NewGrounds.com for my more professional content.
Although you might feel this is very creative, why would we want to watch it? Perhaps you might submit it as art?
From the viewers point of view, there is nothing interesting or entertaining about it. Please come back with something actually interesting or entertaining OK? :)
im here to dump art, i dont care about people who look at it or not
Yep, its all there. Good art, good animation, music, sound and voice. I found it to be a very NG movie, with all the details there.
Nothing I would particularly change. Keep going!
Thank you for your kind review. We will hit our projects hard to keep dropping similar yet fresh content. Stay TOON'D
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