Good but mixed
Art/animation Mixed quality
3D angles/ perspective mixed up but good effort
Ideas Good
Text not very good english
Don't like the title. Sh1tty is spelt thus anyway
Music options good
Good but mixed
Art/animation Mixed quality
3D angles/ perspective mixed up but good effort
Ideas Good
Text not very good english
Don't like the title. Sh1tty is spelt thus anyway
Music options good
Yes I don't like the titel either. If you have a better one? ;)
And yes I am dislectic. ;'(
But what do you mean with mixed quality?
I trust you WONT end here!
This is very good, vastly improved. there is so much story to tell. I will study the series in detail and PM you the text edits, as requested- So far I haven't spotted any, but I will go over it a few times and explore the extras too.
9/10- but its still a stick movie and its not all that original a plot, yet. The quality of the whole series will depend on where you take us with the story now.
Well done.
Ice
Thank you
Nice bit of fun
nothing great about it, but its a nice idea, with a good community feel.
+OK music
obviously the quality was mixed TO's peak thing was a rather nice idea.
Maybe it could be made into a whole set of hyperlinks to wherever the people wanted to send you, their wb or their profile or their favourite sub. I know it would be laborious to do- I've done a few hyperlinks, but it would give the thing more interactivity and more purpose. We could see some fun things on the overs of the buttons, too.
It was considered, but alas, we didn't want to overdo anything, thanks for the review :)
Christmas Dragon- Yay!
Well, yeah. I would be a bit biased, wouldn't I?
No seriously. Its good. I don't like claymation much and I don't usually watch it here cos its usually lame.
+Well lit
+full story
+well created
+got a dragon
+good voices
+got a token amount of flahs in it!
thanks. I'm glad that you liked it.
Not bad... please work on it.
+ good art
+OK animation
sort of story
sort of funny
-didn't really understand it- talk to your friends, get someone to help you make it what you mean it to be.
-glitch at the end- it just stops, then if you press play you get some meaningless, silnet mouth movements
Art good tho, please work on this
LOL...
thanks for the help...i seriously need to work on my attention span because i get so focused on makin one..then i just get lazy...really lazy...but I'M gonna try my very hardest to make a full...fully detailed, flash with all the works...AND I VOW TO MAKE FRONT PAGE AND TOP....100...HAHAHAHAHAHAHAA. ..THANK you for your review though..you helped lots
Keep working on this.
+ Looks good
+ animation good
+ idea good
-Needs intro/explanation in the movie
-Not finished
-credits slightly off right hand side
-Replay button didn't work
-redo lift buttons- in neat row and all same
-redo scribbled plant pot into neat shape with gradient
The above improvements would make it worth 7/10
Its generally good work- but frustrating as it is- you have good material turned into crummy stickman fight by lack of story and above errors. Please do improve, its worth it.
OHHHHHH...forget to add a actionscript to the restart button. sorry.^^
Got potential
Submit as an alpha, with more info and I will give you a full review.
Not sure how to do that but things unfortunately changed since I dreamt of producing this series and it's no longer my priority.
Good
I don't even bother with Klaymation usually, but I'm glad i did.
Most KM is poorly lit blobby crap I bl@m a lot of it.
However, yours had:
+ good story
+ OK voices- ,though maybe another voice actor would have been better than u x2!
+ Good lighting
+ good lip sync- not great but OK- it really helped the movie.
+very good sounds.
+nice use of props
this is one of the best I have seen here and 7/10 is probably the highest I give for KM.
thanks, man!
Was in the Dragon & Spirit Alliance. My DS Halloween & Christmas Quizzes are in the 2006 Collections. I was the main organiser on Wikigrounds, though I don't spend much time either there or here these days. I was a writer in the Monthly Writing and VACcom
Age 60, Male
Writer
London, UK
Joined on 9/29/05