IceDragon64's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[HIV/AIDs awareness]

Very good

+Good Art
+Good sound
+Good voice
+good message

I wouldn't change it

Do more flash!

Best of luck in the pagent,
Ice

StormyHotWolf88 responds:

;.; You're awesome, thanks!

[Save Tom Fulp!!]

Fun, funny

Liked it. It had the CC charm and silly style I have grown fond of.
I liked the Mars bar joke and the selection of music.

Didn't like the loop at the end much, though, it looks lousy, seeing the spaceship fall back each time.

CourgetteClock responds:

Yeah I got lazy with the spaceship =3

[shity pc]

Good but mixed

Art/animation Mixed quality

3D angles/ perspective mixed up but good effort

Ideas Good

Text not very good english

Don't like the title. Sh1tty is spelt thus anyway

Music options good

Minodragon responds:

Yes I don't like the titel either. If you have a better one? ;)

And yes I am dislectic. ;'(

But what do you mean with mixed quality?

[Castle III part D]

I trust you WONT end here!

This is very good, vastly improved. there is so much story to tell. I will study the series in detail and PM you the text edits, as requested- So far I haven't spotted any, but I will go over it a few times and explore the extras too.
9/10- but its still a stick movie and its not all that original a plot, yet. The quality of the whole series will depend on where you take us with the story now.
Well done.
Ice

Get-lost responds:

Thank you

[Mount Newground]

Nice bit of fun

nothing great about it, but its a nice idea, with a good community feel.
+OK music

obviously the quality was mixed TO's peak thing was a rather nice idea.
Maybe it could be made into a whole set of hyperlinks to wherever the people wanted to send you, their wb or their profile or their favourite sub. I know it would be laborious to do- I've done a few hyperlinks, but it would give the thing more interactivity and more purpose. We could see some fun things on the overs of the buttons, too.

SirNightOwl responds:

It was considered, but alas, we didn't want to overdo anything, thanks for the review :)

[Not Now]

Very Good.

talented and poinient.
+Good Art
+OK animation
+Good sound
+good Voices
+best Moon I've ever seen- first one that shows you actually looked at the moon! I can see Mare Crisium on it! 10 times better than mine in my IHR!
+its got message

you can't help the filesize, you need the audio clarity.

Filmpiegang responds:

Thanks alot! I love getting reviews like this one :)

[Christmas Dragon]

Christmas Dragon- Yay!

Well, yeah. I would be a bit biased, wouldn't I?

No seriously. Its good. I don't like claymation much and I don't usually watch it here cos its usually lame.
+Well lit
+full story
+well created
+got a dragon
+good voices
+got a token amount of flahs in it!

Homeless responds:

thanks. I'm glad that you liked it.

[ICE IS WONDERFUL]

Not bad... please work on it.

+ good art
+OK animation

sort of story
sort of funny

-didn't really understand it- talk to your friends, get someone to help you make it what you mean it to be.
-glitch at the end- it just stops, then if you press play you get some meaningless, silnet mouth movements

Art good tho, please work on this

Arec responds:

LOL...

thanks for the help...i seriously need to work on my attention span because i get so focused on makin one..then i just get lazy...really lazy...but I'M gonna try my very hardest to make a full...fully detailed, flash with all the works...AND I VOW TO MAKE FRONT PAGE AND TOP....100...HAHAHAHAHAHAHAA. ..THANK you for your review though..you helped lots

[The last hope...]

Keep working on this.

+ Looks good
+ animation good
+ idea good

-Needs intro/explanation in the movie
-Not finished
-credits slightly off right hand side
-Replay button didn't work
-redo lift buttons- in neat row and all same
-redo scribbled plant pot into neat shape with gradient

The above improvements would make it worth 7/10

Its generally good work- but frustrating as it is- you have good material turned into crummy stickman fight by lack of story and above errors. Please do improve, its worth it.

Emi-Killer responds:

OHHHHHH...forget to add a actionscript to the restart button. sorry.^^

[A Ride Home]

nice, warm, inspiring!

+As an author, i understand the idea of looking back and how you get something from ytour fans and it motivates you.
+nice music
+nice message
+Some very good art and animation - nice reflections

-Your brother's reflection is not a mirror image though, you might want to fix that!- yours is!
-its generally preferred for a moive to speak for itself as much as possible, so if any way could be found to put more of the thoughts in your notes into the movie itself, that would be better- the review before mine about 2 gay men is a case in point!
-You made a good attempt at capturing the train in motion, jerking, but it could still be better. I am not quite sure how, but maybe if you go on a train and actually look at how the movement goes you might improve this. One of the things is how the people and flexible objects move in relation to the solid, fixed objects of the train itself.
-personally, I would have sound very quietly in the background under the music. faint train sounds and maybe even faint firework sounds.
-the shot when your two heads are turned to the window is not a very good picture of your heads. its not as good as the rest. I can't figure out why offhand, but I am sure of it.

This is good work. I hope to do something more like this in the coming year.
IceDragon64 of the Dragons & Spirits

MaxJayJay responds:

Hey thanks man!

Plans to make this animation longer and better were considered as well. But it was made from the beginning to make this short and it was to reflect the event that just happened. I already have so many long music animations posted here and besides I have one long one coming up.

But thanks very much. I will take your advices into my consideration.