OK for a pilot
Finish it to that standard and I will pass it at least 2/5.
I don't pass pilot/test/previews Tom asks us not to submit them. 0/5
spelling:
there/their owners
OK for a pilot
Finish it to that standard and I will pass it at least 2/5.
I don't pass pilot/test/previews Tom asks us not to submit them. 0/5
spelling:
there/their owners
LOL, fair enough
Difficult to vote/review
I usually avoid Star Syndicate because they put in such crap with the good stuff. I don't aprove of a system which pushes crap through judgement.
todays Dailytoon is a good example.
Taylor Bortners work is very good and I would almost pass it on its own, though it doesn't really have a point/conclusion.
The rest were just rubbish and I would give them 0/5.
Having said all that, the Dailytoon graphics look very good and the Star Syndicate deserve the credit for a lot of work.
Dragons & Spirits judge only on Merit and despite the above comments I will always pass any Dailytoon which I think overall deserves to stay on NG.
we have an obligation to use any and all toons that get sent to us. we obviously cant have all flashes like taylor's every single day.
OK
Spellings:
intense
species
Anihilated
Tnx Ill EDIT them Mistakes... thanks 4 the review mate ^^
OK
needs credits, otherwise OK.
Music: Chronicles of Narnia.
Everything else: Me.
BBQBeefBurguerMan pic: BBQBeefBurguerMan
Ok
give it sounds
sort out the spelling
No sound... like my other spiderman movie it was just kinda like a music video... but maybe my third one will have sound. Anyways thanks for the review
borderline
I don't honestly think much of these burger Flashes, I don't understand the appeal, but I respect the fact that others do and you cater for their humour- I can see that they are reasonably well put together, of their type.
The way the womans face changes after the fart was funny.
The spelling could do with a bit more effort
decicated/dedicated familys/families
Well english is still not my first languane,so i may have some spelling issues ok.
Good collab, nice system
Like most collabs, the standard was mixed. shame to stick in just a bit of the crude stuff and spoil the mix of family viewing.
I really like dthe format of TV and remote etc.
The idea of the smell-tones was the funniest
Well everyone has their own tastes, it would be boreing if you had a collab with all similar movies. There was nothing really bad in this movie anyways.
Great Fun
Your stuff is good
A few spelling details:
Auther/Author summond/summoned a Armageddon.
I would have put Darth Sideous by his name.
5/5
tell me about me spelling mistakes ay... thanks...
Great Stuff!
Very good. Very funny etc.
As you are now in the top league of Flash and seen by the whole world, you might improve the spelling, though:
Auther: author volage:voltage realy: really pulled of; put hem in;
witch: which allot: alot I'll will : I will Thing: Things ; to much to wright down
Don't get me wrong, I gave you 5/5 !
I dont blame ya.... my english talk is way better then my typing, sorry bout that... my spelling-checker is broke
OK tutorial
Graphics were simple, but effective.
sound quality good, liked the fact that it involved your own sounds.
spelling- P-fingure (finger)
otherwise OK
I total over looked that but then again
my spelin dos suk
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