the English is weird
It doesn't make much sense, from the Authors notes through the movie. However, the rest of it is weird, random, but OK
the English is weird
It doesn't make much sense, from the Authors notes through the movie. However, the rest of it is weird, random, but OK
you can be right but it was not for that score
"Suitable for all audiences?"
I think not.
Shutup.
its OK. Its funny.
I don't care what it parodys etc. Wand of Cuteness- funny!
Maybe she should do more with it.
TY. For a first I was going for brevity to make it easy on me self to animate.
The sword swinging scene was pretty hard.
As I go along Im learning the little tips and short cuts.
I was thinking of making another with Lola and Inu dont know. My next movie will be completely differnt.
Im a writer at heart, I learned to draw out of necesity. Glad ye liked it.
Not too bad
If it causes a few people to learn about blowing the whistle I guess it can't be all bad. however, there isn't realy much to it and I can't bring myself to recconmend keeping it. I think you could take this theme and do something really good/funny taking the mickey out that dreadful series, but this isn't really it.
Eh?
Finish it and I'll pass it!
It will be good.
actually, it did pass judgement....i curently has 2.9/5
borderline protect
Its not my taste at all, but I realise that it is reasonable stuff. I didn't uderstand a lot of it, but hey thats just me and you did give us very clear warnings about the content.
It would be much better with voice acting, as you know.
I liked the warning at the beginning, but the spelling was terrible.
I know I am an old fuddy but there are others like me and we do vote, so please after all that time taken to create, get someone to go through and check the spelling:
in the Warning:
randomness, subliminal, squirrel, suitable
After the Warning:
portrayal.
Thanks,
I'll make the corrections now. *can't spell to save her life*
Funny- nearly good enough
Yes, it was a funny little joke.
I would prefer it to have a little more to it to actually keep it on New Grounds- a little more animation- actually do somethjing with the shorts etc, maybe show more shorts on people, to make it more Random shorts instead of mostly shorts on the floor.
Good joke though
hmm, i didnt really think about this much did i :(
Not quite there
I think you need more to it. as you said, perhaps part of a compilation, or just add another animal or two two it.
Tiny shorts can make it, but they need to be exceptional. Please do work on it.
3/10 1/5
Well it's through judgement, with a considerably higher score than 1/5, I dunno wether its worth adding to it... I guess I could do something real quick...
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