IceDragon64's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[[CD]y'all want a single?]

Finish it and I'll pass it!

Looked good

What is the Clock number 1337 about, please?

linksman11 responds:

? 1337? wait i don't understand the question.

[lll_Join NG_lll]

So sort the sound, then!

Its good and the voice is good, its just, as you say, the background is too loud.

It expresses NG very well.

alexsmolik responds:

Thanks man. Glad you rather liked it.

I wish I could sort the sound out, but I have NO idea on how to. It kinda ruins the feeling I wanted to make with the voices. Because if the background wasn't too loud, you could hear that I was taking a very deep voice, like in those comercials/trailers or something. I thought it would be funny, but it kinda jinxs it lol.
Thanks for the review!
ALEX

[Cold as Ice Opening 1]

Weird, but Good

It looked good but you could probably improve some of the graphics.

I suppose it might make sense to me if either I knew about the series or if I knew the language (Japanese?)

I prefer a proper credits page, not just a mention in the notes.

Rule responds:

Thanks for your review. Yes, I have a series, but It isn't too good.

[The Great Dock Crusade]

OK stuff

Some of the graphics were very good. I liked the 3D style angles you put in there, such as the weapons turned toward 'camera'. This is better than most 'Ocks', who use only boring side views.
(Its also better than mine!)
I would have preferred a little more detail in the background- for example as the dock on horseback rides towards camera, you could have him ride past things, so it looks more like rushing movement.
I think I prefer this speech to Speakonia.
Do more.
We were writing a sketch for a future animation, in which we put Socks and Docks for a joke- now I see that reality has caught up with us before we made it!
Regarding your Authors Note- I assure you that Dragons & Spirits vote only on merit- this works both ways- we don't vote badly because someone is an 'Ock' or in any other group, but I threw away dozens of protect points by zeroing a lot of rubbish on clockday yesterday!
Best wishes from IceDragon64 of the Dragons & Spirits

MeMB responds:

Great review. I'll work on the points you mentioned. Best regards from all the Docks.

[Fight in the void]

borderline protect

If other voters are giving this four or five I can only think that they haven't seen much of this
'stickmen fighting with no backgrounds, plot or speech' before.

The fighting action is to quite a good standard although some of it seemed slow.

I will pass it because I like the fact that the figures are dropped in and show a kind of story/interaction other than just fighting; also the bizarre way they lift out from time to time is good.

If you want to persist with stickmen, try the occasional close-ups on faces and exploring glimmers of personality.

RockLou responds:

I am going to use flash from now, and I am going to make a story. This was much like training to me actually. I needed to experiment a little before I go flash.

[Who is Hexjibber (part 1)]

OK. Almost Good

The scribbly stuff isn't very attractive, but it has length, story and humour. the whole idea of bringing your friends' Hexgibbers to life is entertaining.

The naration and speech is sometime hard to hear. You might put in subtitles, especially for the people of other countries, who don't understand our accent very easily.

I think I would probably have given it 6/10 3/5 if only it had ended more neatly, with credits and any other info, such as when you expect pt 2 to come out.

Please do work on it. The originality is refreshing, especially after Clock Day nausea!

Hexjibber responds:

Yes, I see what you mean about it ending rather abruptly. I'll have to sort that out. I'll have to upload part 2 tomorrow, because I am over my limit of submissions today. I'll consider some subtitles, as I know there are a lot of weird British accents in there.
Thanks for the feedback.

[Doodles: the movie]

Nothing wrong with it...

if you like that sort of thing, but it didn't do it for me specially.

Happy Clock Day anyway

Barquis responds:

Thank you for your opinion.

[Sir Clock Makes a Flash]

Nice one

A decent Clock film with no speakonia!

Not much actual animation- no walking, for example, but some nice art.

I loved the error message!

Creatus responds:

Actually there was walking! Watch the movie again! Thanks for the 5/10! <:D

[June 6th 1944]

Not bad, keep working on it

Its a borderline pass as its not really finished. Please finish it to the same standard.

I cannot hear what the medic says over the loud music.

64 responds:

I know, it's really loud. Go to Options and turn on subtitles.

[CC - We own]

I didn't like it much but...

...at least the clock works!

GenericBallKlawk responds:

Happy Clock Day!
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