IceDragon64's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wesley and Izak 1: Urine]

its crap but its OK...

...if you see what I mean!

+Random can be good, and this is random
+sort of story
+animation/graphics adequate to tell the story, with backgrounds etc.
+surprisingly the spelling/english is OK
+ the 'serious' moment in Austria was funny
+voices funny
+proper credits

-not much of a story, doesnt make sense
-very hard to hear
-ugly, scribbly graphics
-no sounds apart from the voices and music

Do More Do more!

Shinpachi222 responds:

Welcome to my brain, and you WILL see more of it.

[666UpYours]

Intriguing but...

...as it is- not enough.

The story should be in the Flash not the notes. We need the credits in there too.

this has great potential.

Sir-CannabisClock responds:

I created the story when someone bugged me that this loop "needed a story or something".

[Vault]

Bizzarre, some nice touches

Despite its simplicity it has a few moments, like the effect of the misty cabinet and the glimpse of the clear bottles as he opens it. I know its just a question of alpha, but it looked good.
As I put to gether all the details in your various submissions I can see that you know your stuff. Lets hope you can get it all together for the great one to come!
I take it Jim is rich if he takes no change from $100! Maybe that will be you one day!
Nice choice of music again. Sorry 6/10 isn't much for sound, but I rarely give more for only music.
Best Wishes,
Ice

Jimtopia responds:

Thx for an honest review, yes, Jim is rich, if you go to my site and watch "The Lottery" it'll explain everything.

[Tetris Unleashed 2]

I Like it!

Good work. Do more. I agree with MMD. Some good images.

although generally like your choice of music, you should consider other sounds as well. If you get the volume balance right it can be very good and enhance a movie a lot.
spelling:
peices/pieces
caffiene/caffeine
Best Wishes,
Ice

Jimtopia responds:

Thx for reviewing ice.

[Tetris Unleashed]

Tetris. Good. Yes.

It had some style and atmosphere to it. I wish I could pin point suggestions to make it still better. Usually I dislike your lack of background but this time its OK. Its all a sort of dreamlike thing. what was the red towel thing in the backgorund that appeared and disappeared? Perhaps its just me being stupid...?
We are working on a Teris project. I hope ours is as good.

Jimtopia responds:

Can't wait to see it. As long as you don't copy my plotline, lol.

[Stuck in the Desert]

As you may realise by now...

...I am exploring all your Flash to see what you do. My coments are the same as Joltmasta. From what I see of the Brackenwood alpha you've come on a lot since this. I sincerely hope so if you are serious about the project!
I loved the song. I might make a little educational using that song!

Jimtopia responds:

It's been months since anyone has reviewed this toon. Wow, thx.

[JimSpin]

Sorry, I can't offer much for this.

There's nothing much to it, although I agree with you, MANY worse things have got through!
If you had just done a bit better lip sync or more going on I might have 'passed' it.
Best Wishes,
Ice

Jimtopia responds:

Well, thx for an honest review, the thing is, their isn't supposed to be much to it, and the lipsyncing is supposed to be off.
Thx anyway.

[Jim: His Hidden Life]

Whilst I know this is Crunk fo' Shuggle...

... whatever that means, I see what you meant about difficult to understand. since this is an important flash you should think about expressing it a bit differently- working on it to make the story go better. You surely know that subs shouldn't rely on explantions in the notes.
Its good, its got good music.
I would make the sky lighten toward the horizon in all the scenes, I think it looks better. Take a look at mine if you like and see what you think.
Best wishes,
Ice

Jimtopia responds:

I was thinkin' about redoing this one, but not anytime in the near future. I'm glad you think it's good. Hmm, so make the sky get lighter towards the horizon? Aight. Thx for the review.

[Shape 01 - Fight]

Yay!

(Moo not mo)

otherwise Yay!

MarcyVF responds:

Thanks 4 reviewing! haha! ok "moo" XD