very interesting
Very good.
Good art- tho limited with white backgrounds and no colour etc.
Very good animation
Very good sound
*Excellant voices
Good, if not very original, story line.
You have created a certain amount of personality, which is very important and so oftenb missed in other major subs. It is vital to give the charaacters personality, in order for the viewer to CARE what happens.
A glimpse of home life inserted in this, even if it were just a phone call from wife showing normal home life, would make it all seem a lot more personal.
If you don't want to stretch to that, then at least give her a name in his dialogue.
I am not sure what the episode subtitle is supposed to mean assention is not a word. I assume you either meant ascention or assertion. Also tiny sp. in the credits: offical/official.
high quality work. Could become something exceptional.