The Tutorial I might use this
I haven't seen many tutorials, but this is one of the better ones. I read Kano's review and your reply. I think you both have a point. It is true that to inspire confidence you have to show Flash ability beyond that which you are teaching; however I think you may be right to keep the background simple.
Sound, though, would be a good way of showing ability. Especially since you taught us to do it, you needed sounds as well as the music-bleeps on the buttons etc. I thought the music was OK, but perhaps it needed to change in different parts of the tutorial or something.
Get someone with good writing skills to proof-read your tutorial. remember that in a tutorial, you are a teacher, not a text-talk dude, so it must be perfect grammer and spelling- Having said that it WAS better than most Flash writing. I think Flash should always be written with a capital.
Thank you for this tutorial, I really will give it a go.
