IceDragon64's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[The ultimate horror quiz]

Good Quiz

As a quiz specialist myself I respect this. It inspires me to want to better in my own quizzes (take a look sometime).
There were an awful lot of questions and I know how much work that takes to make. It was rather tame of you to warn us about the screamer, I thought! It might have been better with a variety of screamers. You probably would have been better off putting checkpoint between less questions, a lot of people don't have the patience to go that far and keep going back to the beginning. I don't have more than 5 without a checkpoint- your second quiz is much harder because all the questions and answers all look the same.
A lot of the text needs editing- it isn't too bad by NG standards, but you let yourself down with letters missed out or mistyped eg.
GO IT?/GOT IT?; Prject/Project Zero; Usally/Usually; excorsist/Exorcist. If you would like me to do a complete list then let me know and I will send you everything I can find. I will expect a little mention in the credits, though it takes quite a lot of work!
Good work.
Best Wishes IceDragon64 of the Dragons & Spirits

Mechabloby responds:

Wow. I'm really bad at spelling! :P

Glad you liked it.
(I don't want a complete list. It'll scare me!)

[halloween clock game]

It looked good but I was useless!

I can't judge the game cos I didn't get anywhere! Maybe Im just crap.

Please dont use the f word in authors notes.

HoboPorn responds:

hmm?

I have gotten to lvl 3 but thats it, it's really hard, but hey if it's hard then it will be played more :D

[Music 101 (Treble)]

Good, original and effective

+ Good sounds
+ Good naration- is that you?

-the both game is too difficult for me and I play the piano, I think maybe it needs to run slower or something
-The Treble clef should always be positioned so that the inner curl end ends up on the G, not above it. It is other wise known as the G clef.
-redo the first voice, the hesitation is lame and not up to your good standard. Also take out the first 'though'
Well done.
It makes me laugh that there is always some lame reviewer who tells you education wont work on NG! You and I know that is ingnorant crap! We make our whole reputation on NG education and I have the review scores and favorites to show that at least some people think educational flash is good stuff!
We will continue!

ShrimpFryRlCE responds:

Haha that's great, Glad u could make it while my music 101 was still under judgement =) it's my highest score yet.. right now it stands at 2.7 i think.. yea, i stumbled alot while doing the narroration -.- and i was talking on the phone with this gurl at my school while i was doing it, so i had a dry throat..

[Star Hunter]

Good game, my hands ache now!

+ very playable
+ upgrades

- I cant get the hi score to work. I type in my name, but it comes up with "type name here" on the chart. I was quite proud of my score I am 29875. :(

FrostedMuffins responds:

Ah man, thanks for spotting that, very very sorry. I'll update it tomarrow. Thanks for the review.

[mouse game tutorial]

Looks OK

I don't do much actionscript so I can't judge that much , but it looks OK as far as I can see. I might try making my own cursor, that could be cool.

Afew small details:

Make a proper hit area for your back & forward buttons. At the moment the thin green line is the hit area, so if you click in the middle of the arrow, as people will, it doesn't work. Just go into the last part of the button maker which most people ignore and make a fair sized rectangle.

whos/who's

in Step 1 the actionscript covers a bit of the text.

yodd responds:

This was mostly an excuse to submit somethign useful to newgrounds, glad you like it. Fatal killed my cats

[Oddworld Maze 2]

thank you for making it clearer!

I figured it out, with some difficulty and played on. I happened to go back in just now and there was this read writing, making it clearer.

Its a challenging game and I played for quite a while.

alio-big-mac responds:

:D thanks mate, i just changed it, becasue i though so many people might not understand it :D

[Happy ClockDay!]

I shouldn't really have passed this...

... but its cute! Cute factor 6

Its a good idea, but really should be developed.

More options please:

Backgrounds to change with the stuff coming out
Cursor, preferably to change with the stuff coming out too.
Maybe buttons to press before you start.
Music options too.

suggestions:

-Pink bunny options with hearts coming out and over-cute background.

-LL options
-NG tank options
-other clocks

El-Moo responds:

Pink bunnies? What do you think I am? Gay or something? Oh, and LL sucks pink bunny cocks.

[Star Wars Quiz V.1]

Borderline- please improve

I got straight through cos I am a fan.

Its a bit basic. more questions. Greater variety. Use sounds and pictures in the questions eg what sound is this?

The music is NOT the J Williams theme tune- what is it?

Spelling:
"I would liek/like..." Tanks/Thanks for playing

3vo responds:

yea i know its enigma i put it there i read the rules and it was disadvised so i changed it and forgot to chnage the ending.

[Doctor Who Soundboard]

Sorry, it is quite a good soundboard...

... but with no real animation and little in the way of graphics- pictures of the people etc.- I cannot real pass it on a Flash animation website.

The sounds were mostly of reasonable or quality and I wish you luck with this soundboard elsewhere or developed more appropriately for this site.

RFCDude responds:

Well most soundboards have no animation in because they are used to play sounds not to watch :s