Yay!
+This is SO good.
+I totally approve and support this submission.
+this is the only tutorial in my FAVOURITES. It will be used over and over. I did some Karate and picked up a few scraps, but not enough to build on.
Thank You
-You might get your sensei to pronouce the whole sentences at the end.
-Grasshopper is used here as a name and should, therefore, be capitalised. I will contact the other Dragons & Spirits- I feel certain they will support this
Thanx! I actually don't have a sensei. The voice of the sensei was just sounds I took from a small program I had. lol When it comes to stuff that I don't have in my current collection, I may look elsewhere for authentic voices but if I can't find any that match what I want to teach, I may have to resort to saying the phrases myself. I don't consider myself bad at pronouncing Japanese, but it's just for safety that I search elsewhere before I make my own sounds. I could end up sounding really foolish to a native and teaching people how to speak -Japanese with an English accent- lol
OK dressup
A bit more colour would be nice, otherwise OK
I tried to use as little colors as I could^^
Good reproduction
Keep working on the shake, it would make it major league, especially if it had shake sounds.
It would be better if it had proper credit to the game manufacturer
Right then, that is the last straw!
Im going to make version two!!!
this will have a hell of a lot more control built into it, look better, play better, the hole whibang!!!
I wont vote...
... because i don't know enough about webcams to know if this is any good, but your poor spelling puts me off.
when you are 'teaching the world' you really need it to be right, it affects people's confidence in you as a teacher.
If you can't spell, get someone to help you.
I scanned all the text from the tutorial on MS Word and in total there was 1 spelling mistake.
OK tut
Some of the graphics looked pretty good.
I didn't study it in detail, I'm not a games person, so I can't judge the script, but it seemed OK.
You should remember that in a tut, you are a teacher, therefore try and get spelling and punctuation spot on (its not bad). for example you used the wrong your (you're) and leave a space after a fullstop- it makes it easier to read.
Sorry i never was a grammer kinda guy.
Good Dressup, lots on it!
background and everything. Beats most of them.
Choice of music too and an off switch. Yes, all dressups should be like this!
Glad you think so :)
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Good looking Dressup
neat, well fitted with lots of choice.
music, with off button, would have been nice
Hi hi, thanks for the reply! ^^ Music, yes, I'll definitely remember that! =)
Good Looking Tetris
Its much better looking than the usual NG Tetris. Do persist with your plan to make Chrissie react to our play, it sounds fun.
Yeah, I really wish I could figure that one out, but I'm getting there. ^_^ I'm learning more about scripting as I go along making other games. Thanks for the review!
We don't like tests much...
...I'm surprised anyone wanted to keep it on NG.
However, it shows potential. Check your spelling. movenent?
0/5, 5/10 as a test
Yep test.
movenent? =O I DIDNT SEE THAT ONE!
thanks!
OK Game
+Good backgrounds
+OK controls
-poor sounds, almost better without, they sounded inappropriate
-needed something to happen when you died- a simple YOU DIED text would be better than nothing.
Ok, i never thought of that, but this is created fast wanna play people.
Iwill consider it though
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