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[JapanEaseLesson1]

Yay!

+This is SO good.

+I totally approve and support this submission.

+this is the only tutorial in my FAVOURITES. It will be used over and over. I did some Karate and picked up a few scraps, but not enough to build on.
Thank You
-You might get your sensei to pronouce the whole sentences at the end.
-Grasshopper is used here as a name and should, therefore, be capitalised. I will contact the other Dragons & Spirits- I feel certain they will support this

Cayler responds:

Thanx! I actually don't have a sensei. The voice of the sensei was just sounds I took from a small program I had. lol When it comes to stuff that I don't have in my current collection, I may look elsewhere for authentic voices but if I can't find any that match what I want to teach, I may have to resort to saying the phrases myself. I don't consider myself bad at pronouncing Japanese, but it's just for safety that I search elsewhere before I make my own sounds. I could end up sounding really foolish to a native and teaching people how to speak -Japanese with an English accent- lol

[Alien dress up]

OK dressup

A bit more colour would be nice, otherwise OK

Pertrosfoliea responds:

I tried to use as little colors as I could^^

[Flash-a-Sketch]

Good reproduction

Keep working on the shake, it would make it major league, especially if it had shake sounds.

It would be better if it had proper credit to the game manufacturer

thecoshman responds:

Right then, that is the last straw!

Im going to make version two!!!

this will have a hell of a lot more control built into it, look better, play better, the hole whibang!!!

[Futurama Quiz Game 2]

the violence is on my ears!

such a big change in volume is dodgy, you might harm someone wearing earphones!

Check the spelling- engineering

Otherwise OK

bkdude responds:

lol, i had a feeling i spelt something wrong

[Webcam in flash tutorial]

I wont vote...

... because i don't know enough about webcams to know if this is any good, but your poor spelling puts me off.

when you are 'teaching the world' you really need it to be right, it affects people's confidence in you as a teacher.
If you can't spell, get someone to help you.

Rohedin responds:

I scanned all the text from the tutorial on MS Word and in total there was 1 spelling mistake.

[The Ultra Tut]

OK tut

Some of the graphics looked pretty good.

I didn't study it in detail, I'm not a games person, so I can't judge the script, but it seemed OK.

You should remember that in a tut, you are a teacher, therefore try and get spelling and punctuation spot on (its not bad). for example you used the wrong your (you're) and leave a space after a fullstop- it makes it easier to read.

DarkNephilim responds:

Sorry i never was a grammer kinda guy.

[Kickass Dressup]

Good Dressup, lots on it!

background and everything. Beats most of them.

Choice of music too and an off switch. Yes, all dressups should be like this!

Crusty-Wiwuh responds:

Glad you think so :)
Remember to submit to Dressup Dolls Collection on teh left there!

[:: Dress or Undress Ed ::]

Good looking Dressup

neat, well fitted with lots of choice.

music, with off button, would have been nice

rabi87 responds:

Hi hi, thanks for the reply! ^^ Music, yes, I'll definitely remember that! =)

[ETE: Techno Tetris.]

Good Looking Tetris

Its much better looking than the usual NG Tetris. Do persist with your plan to make Chrissie react to our play, it sounds fun.

EmeraldTokyo responds:

Yeah, I really wish I could figure that one out, but I'm getting there. ^_^ I'm learning more about scripting as I go along making other games. Thanks for the review!

[Fight. Two Players +Demo+]

We don't like tests much...

...I'm surprised anyone wanted to keep it on NG.

However, it shows potential. Check your spelling. movenent?
0/5, 5/10 as a test

Bleiz responds:

Yep test.

movenent? =O I DIDNT SEE THAT ONE!

thanks!