IceDragon64's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Physics Is Fun 1]

Oh, yes!

Fun and interesting, tho simple. Its not something one would do for veyr long, but that doesn't matter. It succeeds in doing what you set out to do just fine.

The perspective of the house is a bit odd and 'persons' should have an apostrophe, but otherwise its fine. Sounds as if the edits you made were a good choice.

you could put in a more info button that would take the viewer to a few pages of info, for those who are curious. For example wikipedia has a page on Coefficient of friction, tho something far less stogy might be better. Some info on how an equation like this might have a practical use might be of interest. Don't be put off by the mindless 90% of NG. You made it fun enough to pass, so now cater for the small percentage who might press the button and fav/five you.

IceDragonkin responds:

I value your opinion a lot and im glad you liked it so much. I'll keep the extra material in mind for the next educational one i do but this ones already lost in the archives of NewGrounds. Oddly enough i responded to your review back when i made this but for some reason the response didn't stay so heres a new one.

~IceDragonkin~

[The Candy Forest]

so-so

It works OK, but the distance from the top to the bottom is so short that I could not get out of the way before the pumpkins hit me. I find it hard to believe that most people could. I got a better score from just zooming the sweets across the page as fast as possible regardless. I got half way through level 3 like that!

It looked and sounded OK, though its not a particularly exciting or original game. Shame you missed Halloween it would definately have scored better at this one or next one.

Spell:
theive/theif

Assios responds:

Thanks for responding. Yes, it was my first game. But, as I said, its more a "Happy Halloween-message", than a game ;)

[Breast Cancer Quiz]

Very good and important

I learnt quite a bit from this, getting thorugh second time. Would you like me to edit it for you, going through the spelling etc? It is something I do quite a lot of here. PM me.

Little-Rena responds:

Nah, people can live with a few miss spellings, it's not like you can't understand it.

[-Intermediate Tutorial-]

Quite Good

Its not amazing- the sound has a gappy loop, the graphics are not pretty and the text is not all that clear to understand, but it has quite a bit in it, it has some examples of what things look like and some good ideas.
What tips the balance from 4 stars to five is the simple but quite effective tips on passing judgement.

bomberbob12 responds:

im still learning scripting sound

[Descent]

very good!

enjoyed it. challenged by it. moving outside world means kinda everything controlled backwards! Music excellant. You might just add some little sounds, just little ones so as not to spoil the music. I got to level 7 and couldn't get past it, but thats just me.

Cecemel responds:

well, thanks you liked it!

[Advanced Flash Tutorial!]

Good Stuff- might get round to using this

Looks good, reads well, makes sense. Don't know if it works of course.

Music not great- it just runs out. Might as well loop it.

Small details:

Quality Toggle- one last thing
-briefing/briefly
Preloaders 1. l ittle/little
2. Retangle/Rectangle
Motion guide
would look better and be clearer if you saw line being drawn, then bouncing ball follow line.

Play Pause 5
a/are tricky

Its good. Its useful. Thank you.

Neo-13 responds:

If you are pointing out typos - thanks, otherwise I'm not sure what you're on about.
The music is looped now. I've updated.

[Criminal Zodiac Calendar]

OK

Art Good- did you draw all these guys yourself? These are good drawings of people.

The whole thing is not really very exciting. Can't say I was very inspired by the idea of doing this, but it works OK. However, as far as I can see it works by month not zodiacal sign. I put in 28th Feb and get linked with some guy from the beginning of Feb, who should be Aquarius, not Pisces, if I remember rightly.
Not one woman in 12?
Spelling etc good for Ng, tho not perfect.

NYG-Meth responds:

All the artwork was drawn by hand in flash. Also, if you put in the 28th of February, it should bring you to the guy for the 20th of February. Make sure you typed everything correctly.

[Small guide to NG and FLA]

good idea-very rough

I am going to trust you will really work on this and protect it, as you are already an author here.

Don't just update it. Start again with a good team if needs be and clean up-
no way sould you submit with chunks scribbled through as out of date! (though it did help your Humour!)
No way is the spelling up to the standard of the ideas etc in this sub
It has great potential please do work on it.
Best Wishes,
Ice

Wyattfilms responds:

Thanks dude.. Your right!

[Expert's Guide to NG-DX]

Read My e-mail!

Dear HWM,

I have replied to your e-mail asking for last corrections and there are some! You haven't included anything! What happened to "I'm not ready to submit yet" :)

The graphics are all there; I like the new sections very much; the choices and menus are superb; between us we have put in a lot of detail; I really like the music choices- a wide range and good sound quality.
I suppose a litlte more humour might have put more life into it, but I don't know...
This should become a real reference point on NG.

I don't believe I have ever given 10 for interactivity before, but how could I not?
I don't usually give more than 6 for just music but the choice is very good and I like the button clicks.
The humour is quite subtle, but its there. I like the title Veteran etc.

This is a real Magnum Opus- hundreds of words of text worked on over months of research, resubmisison, editing and negotiation!
Best Wishes,
Ice

highwatermark responds:

Well thanks. Today's portal just looked too good to resist.

[NG Grope]

Yay!

good original game. Played twice, got 7199 on easy. Then played hard once- couldnt do it!

good music, good graphics. you might want to make higher levels with more letters etc. You might consider puting in a tiny little magical ringing sound when you hit stars. That would be kinda cute.

edit-undo responds:

The higher levels do have more letters (on Hard mode) ;p

I was going to put sounds in, but the music kind of overpowers them. Thanks for playing and reviewing :)