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[Rise to Icon Mod]

I'm confused. This appears to have taken Time and Effort.
Who are you and what have they done with Little-Rena ?

:)

Little-Rena responds:

I did, but sadly, the reception doesn't match the effort put in, and that made me sad! I think there are many things I could have improved here, but it's too late now.

[C-19 Conspiracy Story]

Its OK. Its a bit of fun. It doesn't work totally because a couple of the words are not as you have described- you asked for adjectives in places where they would not be adjectives. Never mind- I got this:

"In their new book, The Art of the Deal, Robert is to have said that COVID-19 is 'They were all stupid', which many have seen as a rather red opinion. Experts have called on The UK, where The Art of the Deal has been published, to take action, as Robert referencing i-phone as part of the problem to COVID-19 may cause ugly among the population.

President Donald Trump today quoted the book in their election speech, in what can only be described as sloppy. The President is considered to be a long time sister of Robert, both of them having worked together in farmer. We are unsure if The UK will take any action against the book, or it's authour.

We did reach out to Robert to ask for their thoughts, to which they reiterated that 'i-phone is to blame' going to to say 'but the cure, it's not to stop i-phone, it's to use toothbrush with it, and we can treat those who have it with table'.

Robert has taken out a patent on table, and intends to sell it for $four, but doctors say this table is sloppy and won't work as a result.

We here are The Times do firmly believe that Robert is a true moronic and will go a long way.

Alan - Health Editor

I do like the music- it adds a certain sense of urgency to the news !

Little-Rena responds:

English is hard, I needed some "the" in there as well.

[Clock Crew DressUp]

Thank goodness, I am finally able to give an honest over-three to my old friend L-R !

I can even give it a meaningful review !

Plus
I enjoyed it- it had some good choices, a variety of music and it all worked well. I give it over-three because MEDALS GOT !!!!

Minus

1. No Pineapple :( Sorry, I know you made four different images, which I appreciate, but four without the fifth?

2. The click area on a few of the small items should be invisibly extended beyond the image a bit- apple's whiskers and the Orange dots.

3. Credits a bit hard to read in that colour.

Question- where did the inspiration for the items come from? Apart from the obvious crown are they associated with particular films etc?

Little-Rena responds:

You can always give me an honest review! Usually, it'll just tell me things I already know!

The big problem I had with this is that I left it to the last minute, in my traditional style! I would have had more of the Clocks, but the problem was coming up with ideas for more items, as for the items themselves, I was trying to go with things that looked good. Originally, the cat stuff was going to be for Orange I think, but they looked better on Apple, so I moved them over.

As for the credits, I forgot to add shadow from the looks, that would have made it so much easier to read! Anyway, thanks for the review!

[Newgrounds in 2019]

I got a medal ! It reminds me of our info submission- it even has E Handbag and a quiz! Its good stuff. Looks good; all works- can't find any errors. OK!

I thought I would do better in the quiz. Don't know where I went wrong !

Little-Rena responds:

Oh no!

[Presidential Speech Generator]

Hard to read the end result, otherwise OK.

Little-Rena responds:

Okay!

[How? What? Why?]

No explanation, or instructions, no sound no acheivement, no sense and Quit button doesn't work. Test it, sort it.

TheBlueRuby responds:

Sorry, I quitted development on it. I just thought I would upload it for the lols. If you want to play it, the keys to are, left arrow key, to move left, right arrow key to move right, and up arrow key to jump.

[How to draw 8: Newgrounds]

Very functional, good looking and OK Music. The selection is great- all the obvious characters are done in detail.

The only details that disappoint are the poor spelling- one really needs to get things like this checked and proofread by someone else- some of the errors are really irritating and lower the reader's confidence in what you say. That and the fact that a small amount of the text overlaps the drawing, making it less easy to read and understand than it might be.

Aprime responds:

Yeah, sorry about that.

I was 16 when I made this and my spelling wasn't the best.
As for the fonts, I had to decompile the project to change the music and that must have messed the fonts and positions up.

Glad you enjoyed the rest of it though.

[Attack Of The Space Food]

It totally doesn't work ? I tried reloading, it but something is wrong.

masteriod13 responds:

It works for me. not sure what kind of issues your having on your end

[Dress Your Snowman!]

Built 2 snowmen

+ it all works
+ it looks OK
+it has music

- Nothing added or special - most decent Dressups have a little animation etc. or alternative bgds.
- music dull
- I can't figure out what some of the items are- the dark double humps are?
- Spelling, so little writing, you could get it right

megadoctor responds:

Double Humps were supposed to be their feet, Sorry I'm not yet so good at drawing.

Thanks for reviewing.

[Horrific Toaster Accident]

very good

Funny- made me actually laugh out loud a little bit, when I thought it was the end- I hated you rather a lot in that moment!

Good sound, art, animation and suitably wierd story

I think sound sites need more credit in movies than they usually get- they need to make a living too.

I won!
Yes, if the music is good enough people will read on while it plays to the end- you knew that.

Saphirus117 responds:

Thanks! Glad you liked it. I realize I did a bad job giving credit that was due in this video. I was in a rush near the end to meet a deadline and forgot which sites/users I had downloaded which sounds from. It's something I will definitely take better note of for future animations.