OK stuff
I don't really go for Phoenix Wrong stuff and I don't usually watch it here, but I saw it was MEK so I thought I'd check it out.
It's good enough of its type and it is as described- random.
I couldn't quite hear all of it, but that didn't seem to matter much!
Sorry if my scores don't help your totals- I can only vote as I see, but at least I can know I helped protect it through judgement, which it certainly deserves.
Best Wishes,
IceDragon64 of the Dragons & Spirits
I trust you WONT end here!
This is very good, vastly improved. there is so much story to tell. I will study the series in detail and PM you the text edits, as requested- So far I haven't spotted any, but I will go over it a few times and explore the extras too.
9/10- but its still a stick movie and its not all that original a plot, yet. The quality of the whole series will depend on where you take us with the story now.
Well done.
Ice
Thank you
Better and better
Its getter hard to resist. I don't like stick men much but... what can I do... my hand is hovering between 4 and 5!
We need some explanation of why the General and Romanov have come on an expedition so dangerous that one guy has already said the 20 soldiers will not come back from- surely?
I personally would have had helicopter sounds faintly in the background as the hc's were heading out to the castle, fainly behind the music.
Still not quite right with the text
MUCH better than 1 and 2
Got length
Got story
This is what you get when you collaborate to get the best out of people.
Shame its stickmen really, the rest of the art is SO good.
The subtitles are not quite right. If you would like me to edit them PM me.
Best Wishes,
Ice
Do More
domoredomoredomoredomore!
Do the other evil ringtones!
make the series!
Better lip sync would help, though.
Of course its very good, but...
Calling it "Book" 2, as if your little episode 1, which was not much more than a trailer, was a "Book" is very pompous.
It didn't all make much sense:
Why would he set off without all those weapons, then have them thrown after him? However cool you are at catching stuff experts don't take chances and don't set off without their basic weapons.
"Hey, Hank! You forgot these... and you might just want this sword!" You showed off your animation skills at the expense of style and story.
Why would all those people come rushing at- then past him? Or was he supposed to be rushing past them so fast that they didn't even turn to him as he passed and they all carry on looking forward? Yeah, right.
Also, none of them carried any kind of weapon, even though apparently none of them could fight?!
Oh, don't get me wrong, I didn't come here just to be abusive. Its a very impressive flash in many ways, but you've got hundreds of people taking their time to write and tell you how "Awesome" it is, when it has no sound, only music, not much storyline with no explanation or introduction, and it is, at the end of the day glorified Stickmen Fighting crossed with Madness.
If someone doesn't encourage you to make the storyline etc as good as possible, where's the incentive to improve?
Love the details, like the the flag to stab the guy with.
Got bored with the same image of eyes over and over again.
I will check out III soon- expect another long review! I hope despite your success with this series, you will improve the early ones, since everyone will want to see them.
Best Wishes,
Ice
hard to vote/review score!
Its kind of really good and fairly basic at the same time- isn't it?
+art good
animation mostly basic
storyline intriguing to a point but this was hardly what one would call an episode it was so short, its not much more than a teaser/alpha.
I hope you will go back and update this one when you have developed your series as this will let the others down in due course if you don't. While you are at it, get someone to go through the english, its not too bad but the series deserves better and to someone who is good at it, its easy enough.
I know my score is not very encouraging, but we get so many stories about how some series is GOING to be so good and this episode really isn't much yet.
Please put full music credits in the sub. The end credits song is cool- I would like it set to play through to the end, maybe with some little animated loop or preview or something.
Nice production pics- your hands are fine, its anime not Michaelangelo!
Scene Select looks silly when there are only two tiny scenes! It put your Interact up, but your style down!
You have a lot of potential. When I have time I will explore more of your work.
Best Wishes,
Ice
Excellant graphics
+Top art
+Good animation
+some nice timing with the music
+Bobba Fett!
I never rate these bits and pieces very hightly, as I don't actually find them very entertaining, but yours is quality material, well put together of its type.
I replayed it a few times, specifically because I decided to review it. Some interesting oddments in there-
Nice world thing- technically nonsense of course, with static clouds on a moving Earth etc. but looked good anyway.
The opening hand looked good until the thumb detatched itself from the hand; It did all make me want to know about the characters...
So when are you going to create a proper movie and sub it on THE web site? I look forward to something complete with proper introduction, storyline, ending, voices, credits etc that I can 5/5!
Best Wishes,
Ice
very good
The animation is very good and everything, but its the storyline that hit me- the issue of meet the partner in your crowd, which is SO familiar and the remarkable ending.
+art very good
+animation very good
+voices very good
+storyline excellant
I wouldn't change anything.
Nothing great about this one
Its just a put-together of your other ones, with the same old kind of humour.
I suppose if I hadn't seen all the others I would be laughing, but really, it felt like you just wanted to add to the number of flash in the series. It had no new characters except the the exploding celebrity.
However, the pics are still a bit funny and the voices are always good and clear.
Best Wishes,
Ice
Was in the Dragon & Spirit Alliance. My DS Halloween & Christmas Quizzes are in the 2006 Collections. I was the main organiser on Wikigrounds, though I don't spend much time either there or here these days. I was a writer in the Monthly Writing and VACcom
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