IceDragon64's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[NG: Front Page typo]

Yeah, its funny.

Simple, but well enough done. I do imagine it would be like that, however, you would have to do it with USA accents to really make it seem like it could have happened.

[Tom saves the portal!]

It wasnt great but its good enough

Its quite funny and it tells quite a bit of story for an Ock movie. I didn't understand all the words, but the worst bit is the sound got way out of sync in parts, as you know. I often fight with sound sync in flash. It is the worst part of all my movies except IHR.
I have been told that you need to put the sounds into a movie clip to make the sync go right in streamed sound, but I have't got it to work yet. The answers are probably in the BBS, there are references to this kind of thing in the sound section of AS main. If you get it to work properly and master sound please let me know, you will earn the gratitude of the D & S as we are all struggling with sync problems.
Best Wishes to all Clocks
IceDragon64 of the Dragons & Spirits

Mechanus responds:

Thanks. I'll check the BBS. I'm glad you liked it.

[Estar Wars Batle]

Getting better

As I predicted in Chap 0 the scores would go up as we saw more of the story. I did not understand all of it, such as what the hero has in his hand, which is supposed to be so funny. It looks like a nappy. What does the girl throw at the bad guy and why? Sorry, maybe i am just stupid.

yes you do have a few problems with the english but its not so bad. Did you mean to spell the title that way? or did you mean Star Wars Battle?

Closipcom responds:

It's ok, we are trying to be better... But we have a lot of Work for the university and simple do what we can can do...

And the tittle is just for parody but we know write star Wars Battle :P.

Tnks for your comment.

[Bata Cap 0 : Presentation]

Its OK

Its a little funny and its a good enough beginning. the scores will get better as the story develops. At the moment there isn't much to it and we have too many light sabre figths on NG.

[The Friendly Robot]

OK but not great

I didnt really understand it. I couldnt hear what the red creature/person was saying. It didn't make much sense.

However the art was good, unlike so many flash here so I passed it.

superjer responds:

The red creature is supposed to be "Devil Doll" from a popular shockwave cartoon from a long time ago. I wanted to kill him. It doesn't matter what he was saying. :P

[Sherbert the Cat V-day]

Good stuff

Sherbert stuff is going well. I feel you are on the edge of great things with this. Nice sound, art and animation. I wouldn't change it.

Jonimator responds:

Thanks for the review! Glad you like it!

[Sherbert the Cat 2]

Good

+Good art
+good animation
+funny- some nice ideas in there

I felt the mice were rather lame- they didn't really DO much they were a bit of a cop out- really just copy the picture, then dont bother.
its good, though, I enjoyed it. the music and the internet!

Go and watch some classic cartoons critically. Study how they get their laughs, the sounds and music blend etc. make them even better.

Poor Sherbert, he is just doing his job but Tom doesn't look pleased.

You have the basic abililty and with the added support of Sherbert fans you can realy clean up.

[Tro's offline Trauma]

Good, funny

I wouldn't say it was unfinished cogwheel brain explosion is an ending, however it is true one could do more with it.
+art good
+animation good
+sounds funny!
+idea/story funny

Unless you wanted to build on it, I wouldn't change it.

[Total Eclipse]

Very mixed

+Proper story
+ Some good sounds and voices
+ Some OK art and animation

-Some poor sounds
-Artwise its some good pics mixed with scribble

You need to study the final result over and over before submitting- preferably with honest reviews by friends first.

Storywise I think you are assuming a lot of people's ability to understand what is going on. Again, talk it through with people who DON'T already know about this series.

This has considerable potential- please make it the best you can.

Best wishes,
Ice

Ice