IceDragon64's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Newgrounds Experience]

Its not that great

If someone else had done this about any other subject it wouldn't get more than 3/5

+i did like the man sliced in two
+the choice of music was very good.

-Its just stickmen
-No other sound

Was the Create Account button supposed to take me somewhere?

[all yor base r blong 2 us]

Now I Know...

... why the 5 button has that strange phrase on it!

Barely an animation at all, but a good and funny collection of pictures.

A lot of work went into this. I first wrote this review and voted 3/5 before I really appreciated it.

[Slalom]

Its good! Please don't be lazy...

-Make a pale- very pale blue linear background layer for sky scenes. It would look SO much better.
-Put in very faint sounds as well, leaving the music to dominate.
-put streaks in the snow behind him.

-Consider maybe showing a moment of emotion- eye widening, in a closup on his face just before he hits the tree. Possibly a few other close-up moments of narrowing of eyes as he does somthing particularly skilful.

-I think the perspective/movement may be faulty in one scene where the background mountains move relative to the foreground mountains- I could be wrong but it didn't look right to me.
this could be a TOP class flash.
Best wishes,

IceDragon64 of the Dragons & Spirits

[The Clock War: Part III]

As good as I can give a Speakonia film

Excellant portrayal of the traditional Strawbery Clock character and the ethos of the CC.

I see a remarkable change in your graphic style. Generally better. The FU turning up at the end tipped the balance into 4/5 which is very rare for me and especially for any Speakonia film.
Best wishes to you and the CC from
IceDragon64 of the Dragons & Spirits

[Rainbow Illusion (FIXED)]

Thats It!

Fixed, just like I said five minutes ago- I protected it!

[Rainbow Illusion]

One of these...

... I can't beleive I fell for it- at least I am man enough to admit it!

Actually, it isn't quite right. the sound goes off, then comes on again, which takes you out quite a bit first, if it were not for that I would actually protect it.

3/10 1/5

[TPS Episode 1]

OK

I've just come back from protecting episode 2. This one is OK as well.

It didn't suffer from the great variety of speech volumes, but the story etc was plainer, being all one scene.

Keep going guys.

what does TPS stand for?

I forgot to mention in Pt 2- thanks for putting in the intro bit to tell us where the story is at. Keep doing that.

[TPS Episode 2]

OK Kingdom Hearts stuff

You guys put in quite a bit of effort. I gave you 3/5 for that (plus I like Kingdom Hearts)
+OK story
+ OK sounds
-limited animation
-Voice acting had very different volumes
Spelling-
Magesty/Majesty Apocalypse dow/ down insodent/incident peasful/peaceful descovered/discovered hid/hide where-ever/wherever recive/receive.

Also, when the mickey mouse thing speaks one of the speech things comes in from the left to right, which is hard to read- your eyes try to read it from the end to the beginning!
Otherwise, good work, work on it!

Best wishes to your team from
IceDragon64 of the Dragons & Spirits

[lll_Join NG_lll]

So sort the sound, then!

Its good and the voice is good, its just, as you say, the background is too loud.

It expresses NG very well.

alexsmolik responds:

Thanks man. Glad you rather liked it.

I wish I could sort the sound out, but I have NO idea on how to. It kinda ruins the feeling I wanted to make with the voices. Because if the background wasn't too loud, you could hear that I was taking a very deep voice, like in those comercials/trailers or something. I thought it would be funny, but it kinda jinxs it lol.
Thanks for the review!
ALEX