OK
More effort went into all the fancy intro and stuff than the cartoon itself. It all looked great, but it was a dissappointment to just have one short sketch.
the replay button didn't work for me, I tried it twice round.
The sketch itself was OK.
The Authors Notes made me hope for more.
the script was a bit dodgy it will be sorted out in the next sketch.
Another MEK Epic!
Well, you did it! Not only is it a pass this time, but a reasonable score.
+stacks of Interactivity
+lots of imagination and complexity
+like the new MEK intro image
-some parts go on a bit
-plenty of sounds, but the quality still sounds a bit muffled
I look forward to part 2
I'm not sure about part 2, I'll get around to it, I'm stuck on Flash; I don't know what to do. However, here is an idea; I should send the main movie and the game to the company who made it! They would like! I am soo smart, well; it was my Nan's idea.
Hope that your submission under work is coming along great, if you think you need any guidance in sound or anything, just ask! Thanks once more for the review! I need more of them!
Looks good but...
...dissapointed me.
I can't see what makes your parody that much different to all the rest. the images were OK, but the Mishaps were not entertaining at all, they were just the normal things you do to lose lives, whereas some parodies have really funny ideas.
This certainly is NOT the one to end all Video Games parodies. The Dragon/Spirit collab. "Tetris Nightmare" will be out fairly soon.
I found the sounds irritating.
I knew you'd overlook the obvious joke here. Of course the "mishaps" were just minor errors that occur naturally in the game. That's the satire. It's one thing to make a cartoon with Mario being naked or Link trying to sleep with Zelda, but after so many repetive rip-offs of other movies and low-brow sex jokes, Mario/MK/Doom/Zelda mishaps tend to get a little old, don't you think?
Its OK
Its funny, but on NG its pretty predictable that a joyous little thing in a small kb Flash is about to get it in the neck somehow.
The music was good and appropriate and the graphics were fine.
YES!
Its just fine as it is.
It says it all, with good quality sound, background/graphics etc and subtlety in the animation.
OK Stuff
I don't know much about Myspace, but I can guess a bit.
Do the sequel!
Excellant!
Really cool stuff! Full of humour, detail, skill etc.
Nothing realy wrong with it.
Particularly liked
the sister
the "fish -stick it up your..." joke
the star of David
and the dead cat moment
Thank you.
OK stuff
Very good looking.
I like the intro stuff etc.
The main flash looks good but there's not much too it. It could be the start or end of a story that would give you GOOD scores if you made it to the same standard.
If you want, I could ask our double gang to give you a list of ideas for what you could do with this- yes/no?- replay
IceDragon64 of the Dragon/Spirit Alliance
One of the shortest Flashes...
I've ever passed!
Its OK, its funny, theres nothing wrong with it, I've given it the most points I could reasonably give something with so little to it.
Will somebody please tell me what 'OWNED' means in this context- you Americans etc. suddenly use it all the time!
It basically means that you have just gained the right to posses someone seeing as you are clearly more awesome than them.
Was in the Dragon & Spirit Alliance. My DS Halloween & Christmas Quizzes are in the 2006 Collections. I was the main organiser on Wikigrounds, though I don't spend much time either there or here these days. I was a writer in the Monthly Writing and VACcom
Age 61, Male
Writer
London, UK
Joined on 9/29/05
BAZ shorts Ep 1 
Work Exp. guide; Be Safe 
Asteroids Mishaps 
The Littlest Peach 
BusStop 
We Are Robots - Gothbot 
Edd and Tom 1: Edd@OWNED 