IceDragon64's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Crash and pain 2]

OK stuff

what can I say?

Its all there- sound, music, backgrounds etc. but its just stickmen fighting again with no real story.

What does 'ownage' mean?

Looking forward to H7
Best wishes,
IceDragon64

Muskelchock responds:

Yeah i know. I am looking forward to H7 to

[Killing Maniac]

More stick men!

Stick men fighting! How do you get it through?

The answer is simple- music, sound and background. With these three things it has to be a considered as an acceptable basic Flash, which has the overall, borderline score it deserves.
give any sequal some STORY or I will blam it!

The two gangs all saw all H. from 1-6 today.
Ideas from the gangs-
Fencing- sword breaks
Trampoline either bounces to the Moon OR
falls through, taking material down with him.
Horseriding- horse jumps fence, throws rider, lands on rider
Rifle shooting- recoil knocks him over
Basketball- either ball bounces off basket or slam dunk pulls basket etc down.
Most of the two gangs like Hammerthrow and most LOL.
Best wishes,
Ice Dragon64

Muskelchock responds:

Yeah, i trained at fbf and camed to this and after this i gave birth to the hammerthrow series^^ It will not come a sequel. I am making the hammerthrow its much much more fun to do than violence. Thanks for the tips for ht 7.

[Tocks: Episode1-Soccer]

OK

A bit dull, perhaps some kind of background would be good, even if it was simple.

At least it was original, if a bit short and simple.

I guess I would want to see where you go with this.

[Angry Snowman! 3]

theres a little bit to it this time...

.. but not much.

Give it sound and a little more length and we might be getting somewhere.

I CAN see the funny side of this series, but it doesn't make me vote lots. Can you imagine what the portal would be like if everyone submitted stuff like this?

[Dalek Audition]

I think its funny!

I liked it all. the voices, the way each dalek related to the voice and the script.
I suppose you could make the daleks look better, more 3D or something, but this kind of sketch doesn't really warrent it.

Do more. Make the wanna-be daleks do other things, like argue, bump into things, fall off the stage etc...

[The egg people]

Borderline- please improve

I liked the coming into focus thing, and it had most of the basics-
sort of story
sound (crap)
background

but it had only dialog, no other sounds, I found it hard to make out what they said, most clocks use text as well, little animation, no credits and no replay button.

Please improve this Flash

The Dragon/Spirit Alliance are Clock neutral and only judge on merit.

[Crash and Pain]

What can I say?

Stick men fighting? Tell me Mus. how many blams do you put in for every one you get through?

Nice gadgets, OK background. Head going back on was funny.

Thought it was time I started looking at your other stuff. I don't usually look at much more than 150 because I am on pay- as- you- go slow.

Where did you get the weird name from?

Best wishes,
Ice D.

Muskelchock responds:

Yeah, you found my first fbf movie. i was experimenting with fbf. The name whould be...um, i dont remember:P Then in the end it says Crash, pain. And i rewhatched it and saw you review. The fbf isnt fantastic:P thanks for review thougt^^

[The Grey]

borderline protect

dont know why I protected it, you got lucky. We don't like experiments/tests etc much.

It looked good, but it was pointless. Use it in some kind of intro.
Please don't send this kind of thing in again- you give yourself a bad name and you have the skills to make top Flash.

disent responds:

Thanks for your comment, I'm new to this site so I’m not sure what you mean by protecting me, but thanks I guess. I’m not sure if you read my description, but I said it doesn't really mean anything, just a piece of art I felt compelled to make. Thanks again.

[The Hammerthrow 6]

I am a major Hammerthrow fan!

This flash rocks. graphics as silly as ever, just as it should be (but it means you don't get over 8- I'm sure you understand that) with basic animation, but its just SO much fun. Loved the Ice Dragon Soda adverts- kinda fun way of being credited. Glad you put in credits, it makes it better. Love the preload/intro graphics that show you can do it if you wanted to.
thanks for doing the tabletennis and the backstroke. I showed Fire_Eagle (Eagle Spirit) and he laughed all the way through all six.
Pegasus Spirit says do fencing (I suggested it before)
I say do hammerthrow where the ball comes off the cord or the cord comes off the handle- maybe the ball hits the frame of the net and bounces back to hit him. Put in the sweeper somewhere. Maybe the curler goes past the hammerthrower, who trips over him. I will discuss this with all the Dragons and Spirits and e-mail you. Thank you so much for giving us a GOOD laugh.

Muskelchock responds:

Thanks, I am happy that you liked it, It would be nice to get some suggestions in the mail. I am gonna try to get an idea for fencing. Suggest sports too. But i maybe gonna do something else but hammerthrow, but i promise the eight one will come. I think that its nice to have fans:D

[The Little Match Girl]

Beautiful

It is good looking and the music is very good.

the animation is limited and the figures are not all that impressive, but the backgrounds and scenery are wonderful with all the shop signs and the details in the church etc.
The music and sound is well chosen and in perfect timing.

there are a few details I would like you to consider-
-the music stops very abruptly as she reaches the church.
-make the tears in church a little more subtle, paler blue, not welling up over the whole eye.
-make the choir mouth movement better, you don't need full lip sync, but something closer would be much better- the church scene is otherwise so good the silly mouths spoil it.

Well done, thank you

RegisCartoons responds:

Thanks for noticing the details and for the useful advices ~