OK stuff
Very good looking.
I like the intro stuff etc.
The main flash looks good but there's not much too it. It could be the start or end of a story that would give you GOOD scores if you made it to the same standard.
If you want, I could ask our double gang to give you a list of ideas for what you could do with this- yes/no?- replay
IceDragon64 of the Dragon/Spirit Alliance