Not bad
Its OK, but not great. The B** word in the title puts me off. Didn't quite make it for me.
Not bad
Its OK, but not great. The B** word in the title puts me off. Didn't quite make it for me.
Bollocks is not considered a very strong cussword anymore I think. I'm sorry tho. Thanks for watching
Good stuff! Do more!
Quality submission. I liked the humour; the images; the characters; the professional quality overall. Please do more- I like stuff without unnecesary graphic violence and searwords- I vote higher on those. I DO like the end. I think it is spot on.
I can't find anything wrong with it!
Its just SO good. You are an inspiration. It has so many excelant details. The rhinoceros, the expressions, the doorbell... so much. It has heart and feeling. It has everything, including a bit of action. Smooth quality of animation... etc. I could go on and on.
Excellant!
So pleased that this excellant story does not rely on sick stuff and swearing! It is cute, fun, well done and thought provoking. I dream that one day our gang's creations could be this good!
Was in the Dragon & Spirit Alliance. My DS Halloween & Christmas Quizzes are in the 2006 Collections. I am the main organiser on Wikigrounds, though I don't spend much time either there or here these days. I am a writer in the Monthly Writing and VACcomps
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London, UK
Joined on 9/29/05