Good
I liked it. I liked the intro stuff, like an 70's cartoon or animated intro to a 70's movie.
I liked the details- focusing in on the cow and the cliff sign.
Why did the bird fall to the ground (die?)
Good
I liked it. I liked the intro stuff, like an 70's cartoon or animated intro to a 70's movie.
I liked the details- focusing in on the cow and the cliff sign.
Why did the bird fall to the ground (die?)
Good question on the bird. It did die I guess. A lot of sparrows fly into windows in my neighbourhood, guess we have dumb birds - think thats where that idea came from. Thanks for the review :)
I liked it
Fun Funny.
I think the pause at the end is a little too long, perhaps it would look better with a total fadeout to black.
Moderate
A lot of work went into this, but the result was rather slow and boring.
I liked the pictures on the wall. I could hear all the words, which is good, but somehow the sound was not as good as it could be.
The end was annoying.
Excellant!
I have just reviewed the sequel and gone back to find this one. Very good. Love this whole world.
I would prefer it if there were sounds. You could have such good sounds. Such sound as there is is rather fuzzy.
The morals contained in this are heartwarming and very much in tune with the ethos of the Dragon/Spirit Alliance.
The Dragon/Spirit Alliance are Clock neutral- we review movies only by their content. Please save ranting for other places.
Its very good!
This is an excellant movie. Humour, style, content, images, yes!
You have created a world, which in itself deserves credit. Your images of the Portal are top class, especially the Flash movie falling down.
Shame about the quality of Dean Martin's song- can you improve it?
the contrast between the silent movie and the cheerful music at both ends is good.
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Good
I liked it. It was everything it was supposed to be.
You could have shown the ideas that atoms were made up of tiny indivisible particles better. The smaller bits that appeared next to the Smiley atom didn't look like they were the parts that were in him. they should have appeared from within him or we should have zoomed into him.
Scientifically it would have been better to indicate in some way that Dalton's view has been superceded by modern thought in an introduction.
For your purposes it is good, but ideally you would get an adult to do the voice- your voice sounds like it is, a young person putting on an adult voice.
Do more! Do the atom according to Rutherford. I want to see the orbitting electrons!
Then do the latest vision of an atom!
Good
Pretty good for a short. Some good effects. Simple but effective.
thanx dude ROCK ON!
Sorry, I didn't understand it.
Please excuse my ignorance, but I don't know what Hentai is. Could you tell me please?
Technically, it was OK, with good images of the TV and the TV static effect etc.
Hentai is cartoon / anime pornography, the term "hentai" means "pervert(ed)" in Japanese, don't try and associate anything in the movie with the term "hentai" though.
It was weird/funny
which, I guess, was what you intended, so thats OK.
I disagree about the music- it only seems to matter where the music comes from if you happen to be conscious of it from Gran Turismo- a bit like thinking of an actor as typecast in a particular role. To me, not knowing Gran Turismo and probably being more familiar with that kind of French accordian music, it is just music that adds to the Movies' light hearted, weird feel and gives it quirky European humour.
PS. in case you lot didn't know it - lemmings don't really intentionally commit suicide in the sea, they simply instinctively migrate and don't stop when they reach the end of the land!
Was in the Dragon & Spirit Alliance. My DS Halloween & Christmas Quizzes are in the 2006 Collections. I was the main organiser on Wikigrounds, though I don't spend much time either there or here these days. I was a writer in the Monthly Writing and VACcom
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