IceDragon64's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ricks Shorts 1]

Not too bad, keep trying

You've got the basics. A bit of sound; a bit of action; some randomness. You need a little bit more story in each episode. I think the animation needs to slow down a little or something.
Some sound effects would be good.

rz-stick responds:

k ty for the advice, bit more sound effects in and some sort of storyline in the next one, thanks for watching

[Boris i Helvetet]

Weird

It makes a refreshing change to see some Flash in another language. Yes, by all means redo it in English, but don't take out all your own language. Why not do a simple Flash primer of Swedish- it could be fun.

Some of the images were very good.

Get some sound!

[Truth About Men]

Funny

Yes, I guess if a girl looked like that, all too many men would do that! Maybe even me.

Did you lose lip sync halfway through or was that just my end? (yes I was watching the lips as well as the stack!)

[littleFoot]

Awesome

We love Brackenwood and everything in it. It is hard to imagine how you could improve it.

I particularly liked the focusing in on tiny things and Bitey shaking himself etc after seeing the spider.

The Dragon/Spirit Alliance loves your work. We look forward to seeing it. I'm not sure about talking though... you could lose Brackenwood's charm very easily. I hope you know where you are going with this.

[Paper Mario (old)]

Wow, or something

Sorry MEK, I was dying to see the end result, but it will not load properly for me. First I tried four times to get it to load and it goes straight to the Super Paper Mario (bros) screen zipping past the menu, then stays there.

Then I tried clicking on the menu button in the 2 seconds before it dissappears. This puts me onto a screen where the loading alternates with the Play button, but it does not load. I waited five minutes but saw no change. I tried this twice. I have finally voted on it as I would have, based on the last time I saw it.
I would expect a lot of a program this length, and I got it. There is so much to see it is like an evening's TV and so much to do it is almost a game!

As it was on our screens, the sound quality does not match your great vision, your imagination or the obvious effort you have put into this Flash. As I told you, personally I would have made more of the Paper feature myself.
The Flash is very good. Best of luck

[Rogue Flash Revamped]

Hmm

I liked the idea, although I didn't completely understand it.

It wasn't great, the sound could be better. You could do with coming closer more, so you really see more detail/action.

[Birthday cake]

Its OK!

I judge things according to what they are supposed to be and I just imagined it, at this length and file size as an e-card. Top graphics and perfect sounds. Of course you could give it a story or something, but I just didn't see it that way!
Like the other guy said, you could submit it elsewhere if it is too short or basic for Newgrounds, but it doesn't lack quality- after all we could hardly say you wasted much of our time-
Best of luck!

[The Hammerthrow 4]

Good

Thank God for Flash. This amazing program allows you to scribble an idea down, throw in a few sounds and people around the world can LOL!

Obviously, your other reviewers have told you how you could improve the sounds and pictures/background, but perhaps you shouldn't actually change the scribbly people. It is more comfortable to laugh at a scribbly stick- thing than something that looks too real- it is part of the unique style of your hammer-thrower series.

Surely you should have put the same old yellow-shirted sweeper in the curling sketch?!- please try popping him in, sweeping the ice and see what it looks like.

Also, to go back to the Hammerthrower (with all the original stuff, no 'improvements') you could try a sketch where the hammer flies straight at the 'camera' and smashes into the 'screen'.

Muskelchock responds:

Thanks for the great review. I will do thet in the fifth one whit many other sports. The fifth one is gonna have over six different sports. ^^ Thanks again.

[The Hammerthrow 3]

OK stuff

My friend told me about this crappy Flash about a hammerthrow round the world that was so bad he zeroed it- thanks Sam, you introduced me to the excellant Hammerthrow series!

The first three aren't that good in themselves, but instead of groaning about poor this, that and the other, by the time you get to 3 you look forward to the same starting picture and the same crowd sound. The fact that the same sweeper comes to sweep up the blood as was in H1 is part of the humour by now!

Technically, they aren't brilliant Flashes, but H4 is on my favourites list and I look forward to 5

Muskelchock responds:

Thanks for great review (again). To the fifth i will have new sound. Only the same starting picture.

[The Hammerthrow]

OK.

I am reviewing H4, so I went back to see this. It isn't great, but it has the potential which has come to fruit in H4. The touch that makes it is the guy sweeping it up- could you make the puke dissappear, ie look like it is getting swept up?