IceDragon64's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Birthday cake]

Its OK!

I judge things according to what they are supposed to be and I just imagined it, at this length and file size as an e-card. Top graphics and perfect sounds. Of course you could give it a story or something, but I just didn't see it that way!
Like the other guy said, you could submit it elsewhere if it is too short or basic for Newgrounds, but it doesn't lack quality- after all we could hardly say you wasted much of our time-
Best of luck!

[The Hammerthrow 4]

Good

Thank God for Flash. This amazing program allows you to scribble an idea down, throw in a few sounds and people around the world can LOL!

Obviously, your other reviewers have told you how you could improve the sounds and pictures/background, but perhaps you shouldn't actually change the scribbly people. It is more comfortable to laugh at a scribbly stick- thing than something that looks too real- it is part of the unique style of your hammer-thrower series.

Surely you should have put the same old yellow-shirted sweeper in the curling sketch?!- please try popping him in, sweeping the ice and see what it looks like.

Also, to go back to the Hammerthrower (with all the original stuff, no 'improvements') you could try a sketch where the hammer flies straight at the 'camera' and smashes into the 'screen'.

Muskelchock responds:

Thanks for the great review. I will do thet in the fifth one whit many other sports. The fifth one is gonna have over six different sports. ^^ Thanks again.

[The Hammerthrow 3]

OK stuff

My friend told me about this crappy Flash about a hammerthrow round the world that was so bad he zeroed it- thanks Sam, you introduced me to the excellant Hammerthrow series!

The first three aren't that good in themselves, but instead of groaning about poor this, that and the other, by the time you get to 3 you look forward to the same starting picture and the same crowd sound. The fact that the same sweeper comes to sweep up the blood as was in H1 is part of the humour by now!

Technically, they aren't brilliant Flashes, but H4 is on my favourites list and I look forward to 5

Muskelchock responds:

Thanks for great review (again). To the fifth i will have new sound. Only the same starting picture.

[The Hammerthrow]

OK.

I am reviewing H4, so I went back to see this. It isn't great, but it has the potential which has come to fruit in H4. The touch that makes it is the guy sweeping it up- could you make the puke dissappear, ie look like it is getting swept up?

[Revenge Of Abe Lincoln]

Cool, dude

The jukebox bit did it for me- a rare lol.

The whole idea is impressively weird and random (random is good, we like randomness)

I hope the third part will explore a bit more funny semi-history, not just be a bloodfest. I did as you told me and looked back at part 1.

boinky33 responds:

Thanks alot.

[JNMC morrowind ep 1]

OK stuff

OK, so you appologised for not having a preload.

Animation OK but a bit limited. The whole no hands and feet thing does limit the action a bit, but I gather it is part of Clock to do that.

Since I don't know Morrowind I will just judge this technically.

I think you should find a different sound for the swords clashing. the sound you use is a good one for drawing the sword.

The words are not all visible properly on the End/Replay screen- I really couldn't make out the ones on the bottom.

the series has potential. Keep at it. Make a preloader next time, especially if it is longer.

incative-account responds:

thats a fuck load of text for 1 review :S

[F the pOlice]

Some ability

Good Lip sync. Reasonable images. Bonus points for randomness!

Don't like the rap itself. Don't like the message and the language. Some kind of background would be good.

[Make up an excuse machine]

I agree with Banta

I liked the voices- especially the contrast between the 'people' and the machine. the animation is basic, but what it is supposed to be. Although I quite like short shorts some people are biased against anything very short, so you may have to make them a bit longer to get through. Best of luck

DEWHER responds:

I thank you. Its just shorts for everyday. Maybe ill compile them into episodes..I could have made this longer and even made the PEOPLE look realistic. But that isnt what im going for. later

[Star Wars Battlefront II]

Not too bad

The spelling blew it- a few spilling mistaks in a review don't matter but for $@?:'s sake get the title right! Take the time to go over every bit, including the spellings, then get someone carefull to proofread it before you submit. - including the Authors notes, which create a good or bad first impression. We all make mistakes- but our team check each others work. Since I love Star Wars- may the Force be with you!