Good stuff
Good graphics, nice details, not all that much animation, but I liked the backgrounds.
Nice, appropriate music
Sorry to be pedantic, but please put that spelling right- boiling, not bioling ash, it really spoils otherwise good text.
Good stuff
Good graphics, nice details, not all that much animation, but I liked the backgrounds.
Nice, appropriate music
Sorry to be pedantic, but please put that spelling right- boiling, not bioling ash, it really spoils otherwise good text.
Thanks for the good review. I will change the text thank you for pointing that out! I apologize to everyone for my poor spelling.
Its OK
Im glad Maylee understood it, because I didn't figure out what it was. A few little sounds would be good. Shame about the collab., this is OK, but it doesn't stand on its own all that well.
The Dragon/Spirit Alliance is Ock neutral and only votes on merit.
Good, intelligent Flash
Excellent images and information.
The material is very much up my street and I hope you have given many people cause to think.
I gave it 4/5 because there isn't actually much animation, but it was borderline 5 and I might come back and vote 5 some other time!
Nice to see quality flash with details, good sound and music and credits etc.
could you insert just a few more frames to read the info about heathcare, other wise the timing was perfect.
Well done,
Thank you
Good Mickey take
Nice action, liked the re-appearing pencil. the weird semi-storyline is very ock.
Music appropriate, would have been better with a few sounds, otherwise, it was everything it should be.
The Dragon/Spirit Alliance is ock neutral and votes only on merit.
Well, thank you for your kind review!
Style
I had to replay it a few times to take it all in and try to understand it. Some of the details flash by pretty fast.
Wierd butterfly thing!- excellantly random- random is good, we like random!
I take it that was a cigarette and gum at the beginning?
That heart thing reminds me all too much of me!
I see you are a Londoner- so are we.
Sorry, I didn't understand it.
and I can't say I liked it much either- not half as good as Sheep1
However, I am glad to read that you are working on sound effects. I don't do sound myself- I mostly do backgrounds and writing, but I know how important it is.
I look forward to your longer work- make every one the best you can.
Take your time and get your friends to check/review your work- it is very hard to see your own mistakes.
I know I can be harsh, but I review almost everything I see, including around 100 reviews on blammed work which is not in my stats.
Yes, it was funny!
Thats, better! Now I can see your ability
I liked the tongue and the messing around with the NG preloader.
The aftermessages were also funny.
If you get to see our compilation- Kentucky Fried Flash- please don't think I am copying you- I wrote "How not to cut down a tree three months ago!
Sound effects would deffinately help- especially a moment of chainsaw sound, which I'm told is an easy sound to find on the web.
Also a cracking/falling tree sound.
This would help to make up for the rather basic graphics and take you to another level.
This is fun- do more!
Adequate
Not much to it, but it was OK.
A bit of background wouldn't go amiss. Sounds too - a bleat, a bang etc. Replay buttons encourage people to look again and sometimes see more details.
Sorry about my earlier review- I was in a hurry and didn't do Ministix justice. The drawing does have a certain style to it. I am reviewing all your work (and raising your score with my true evaluation).
I do, in fact do Flash, I contribute to MEKoftheMEKkingdom and the Dragon/Spirit Alliance
I aim to bring out my first full collaboration in a few weeks.
Please try not to get into name calling- I am not your enemy, just a rather dark specialist in short subs.
not too bad
For a whizzy scribble
You know what pisses me off? When people who don't animate feel the need to comment on people's style of animating- so before you start giving this a 2 and complaining it's too scribbly; why don't you just piss off and get a copy of flash you neoyuppie scum bag!
Was in the Dragon & Spirit Alliance. My DS Halloween & Christmas Quizzes are in the 2006 Collections. I was the main organiser on Wikigrounds, though I don't spend much time either there or here these days. I was a writer in the Monthly Writing and VACcom
Age 60, Male
Writer
London, UK
Joined on 9/29/05