Excellant again! 5'd
Exactly the same crit as the 1st one- all the same good and bad- plus...
Good character development coming now. St Peter, Corey, the hell guy. I'm on my way to the next one.
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Excellant! 5'd
Top Flight Art
Very good animation
Very good sound
Very good start to story
Very good text, credits etc.- a few tiny details in the sub titles.
NO REPLAY BUTTON!
Should have info about Dantes Inferno in a link to Wikipedia or something.
Should have links to the other parts at end.
Make an end menu while you are at it with all these and any other bits and pieces that real enthusiasts can get into.- web sites, deleted scenes, sketches, scene select etc.
You are in the 4+ range with this series. You will make the top flight by doing everything you can for the people who REALLY like it and will vote and review it to the top.
I viewed this cos Tom linked it in his latest newsletter.
Very good but could be better.
I would like to work on this one with you becuase its SUCH a good idea, the music is a perfect choice and has some good art.
Once we get the Dragon thing right, lets move in on this one and get a score worthy of our joint ability. Simple art improvements could help a lot- the fish eye, the galaxy etc. Keep the PM I sent.
OK.
The soldier one was MUCH better than all the rest put together. I passed it for that alone. I think I would have given it five stars if you had submitted it alone, whereas with all the drug references and so-so stuff, the sub barely passes.
Not meaning to be funny, but I don't think you really need to tell us that you are an amateur (thats how its spelt) in the notes. You might take that out.
seriously, though, if you want to redo the soldier one, improving it to the best you can and resub on its own as a short, I think you could do better than this score. The idea is worth 3/5 at least with good animation and art.
Well thanks for the review. But yes you're right, the soldier one came out by far my favorite and I was really surprised with how well the outcome was. Yeah, some of the others were thrown in with a lot less effort, but I just get really impatient sometimes.
I assume you have to know the references...
to fully appreciate this one. It is kinda funny but its messy and hard to follow most of the time.
Of course it has basic good quality animation and art etc.
Nice atmosphere.
Lots of style. Good animation.
very funny
actually LOL'd a little. They are good and please make more but 9. something/10 and top 10 all time etc? No, I wouldn't go that far.
Its kinda weird how the scores go- daily second place puts you right up there in the all time?
No, it is funny, I particularly liked the 'If they were real' thing.
Good
All good quality.
neat and funny.
I liked the tiny flying insect.
spell reviwe/review at the end.
Oh yes, thanks!
It's my dislexia, the e always fucks me up :S
And I'm glad details like that insect pay off :D
Thanks for reviewing!
Submit the rest of your songs!
I followed the link. they are great.
Despite the simplistic art, th subtle details inserted into this one with added humour make up for it. The song is funny and the random element is great.
It is better to do the subtitles as you have done it here, rather than getting lost black on black as it is in the Business Song.
Don't forget folks, if you all click abusive on any review you think is abusive they will take it away and give you whistle points, hint, hint!
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