actually...
This episode hardly shows Jessica to be a moron at all. compared to other episodes and other submissions here, this is rather limited. Only the style and voice are really that great.
actually...
This episode hardly shows Jessica to be a moron at all. compared to other episodes and other submissions here, this is rather limited. Only the style and voice are really that great.
I must not be biassed...
I wont give this 10 for everything... as my heart tells me to. After all, its not that interactive!
Its great. In all the criticism of Bush, I don't believe I've ever heard it spelt out that clearly. Well done!
Maybe some direct reference to guantanamo bay would be good.
Not the greatest misheard, but...
Funny!
Most of the misheards didn't sound like what you said, but the collection of pictures you chose made up for it with humour.
the final picture is just incredible. they look like two children caught fighting and looking guilty! the action shot of the spit flying out of the dogs mouth as the cat kicks out is stunning.
A lot of good work went into collecting pictures for your interpretation.
Ironically, the sound quality is not bad, its good, so we can hear too clearly what is really being said. maybe what it needs it POORER sound quality, which, by compression, would improve the file size?!?!?!
Thanks for criticsism! :D
Yes that last pic was funny, i found it and i tought maybe i can use it somehow!
Sound quality was actually better before, but i needed to get rid of filesize and i streamed it. Poorer sound quality? But then u can't hear da song! :D
Very good
Generally I don't watch claymation cos its poorly lit crap and this is a Flash site anyway. there are just a few that are worth it and this is one of them.
Its got everything a claymation film could have-the story is good the effects are superb, the high speed action, the guys that get sliced up and fall apart, the wierd random humour and actually, although the sound quality of the voices isn't great, the voices themselves are fine.
Tidy up the typing in your notes, everything else is fine.
I do believe this is the highest score I've ever given a claymation and l look forward to seeing more of this.
Random story demolition!
Funny. Looked good. do more.
Should have proper end and replay.
Has potential to be OK
However, personally I don't think there was enough of it to stand alone as an episode.
they've just met, theres no explanation, no real humour and nothing has actually happened yet.
the graphics were nothign to write home about, but if something humourous actually happened, that wouldn't matter. So far, the idea that these two characters take on the two bodies behind them is all it really has. That looked OK, but I would say it wasn't ready to submit yet.
Sorry
That's a rather harsh overall for something that from what it sounds like, mediocre.
OK
Not great, but OK.
OK art, tho no colour
OK animation
Needs bee sounds to get feel of how you felt.
Colour would be nice, even if it was just the bees- in fact that could be quite a good effect.
I feel that this one is one of those 'had to be there' situations where it is hard to capture and express the humour for other people, so you may get a few people not really seeing the humour as you see it. However I did get some sense of how the two of you felt about making the film and what you put into it.
You just might think of ending slightly different, with a single bee approaching the 'camera', looking cute, smiling and winking at 'camera'- its just an idea.
Wow!
I liked Dads Home, but not all that much, however THIS one complements its predecessor SO well; its pace, its style its detail...
Oh Yeah! Its good Its VERY good!
Nice Characters thing at the end pushes it up further and nice interaction= 5/5
I wouldn't change a thing.
As it is...
...There is nothing much to it. I advise you to put it in the Alphas, as you are told in the Notes.
Yeah, women!
Its OK. not bad at all.
art basic,
animation, not bad. subtle expressions good.
Thank you!
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