IceDragon64's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Stars Lecture]

Not bad.

Looked good. Quite informative.

May struggle here for lack of sound. The text could do with a little editing, but its OK and shows potential.

[LL-Every Mile]

Good

Yeah its all there. I gave up trying to catch the sublim!

the Convoy song takes me way back!

Best Wishes and cyberhugs to Clock Lock on her birthday from the Dragons & Spirits!

Ice

WinchesterLock responds:

Thanks, and I'm sure she would appreciate it.

[LL- Way of the Roman]

Good

Art good
animation- fit for purpose

Sound - appropriate, within the style of LL

Idea- imaginative, different, funny, thoughtful.

Good stuff. Throw out that over-modest Authors notes. You are a Lock and that was proper lock style!

TrueDarkBlade responds:

Thanks, but looking at most of the other more famous Lock movies make me look at my skills and say, "It is crap!" Again, thanks for the words of encouragement. It was encouragement, right?

[SpaceRobotLasers]

only 7 reviews-I'd better write one!

This is a noteworthy submission. Not fantastic but a nice little 3d number.
Nice art
nice animation, not stunning but I've seen worse on TV.
In fact, It had quite a professional style about it.

I would rewrite the notes. You only have a simple story so don't tell us before we see it!

Its OK with just the music, but to go to the next level you would have to either have music which developed in time to the vision or sound effects as well.

With the robots eyes lighting up at the end you have the way open to another episode. Since this one has already been succesfull you should think about making the most of this success and, should you choose to make another episode, developing your skills.

This might mean a more complex plot although the simple plot was OK for this little story, or it might mean develping the sound medium along the lines I expressed above. With the success of this one already under your belt, you should think about collaberating if you have any doubts about any aspects of future productions- its worth it.
Nice work, keep it up!

sorbitol responds:

Thanks for the review IceDragon64!
Sorry it's taken me so long to reply!
I'm glad you liked this cartoon which was my first 3D effort. It was only really an experiment that I thought turned out pretty decent- not stunning, as you said- but decent.
I must take this opportunity to thankyou for writing a proper review that you've clearly put some thought into. I hate having to reply to 14 year old ASBO maggots who elaborate no further than,"*SNIFF* S'alright, s'pose...".
I wish there were more like you-
It has been a pleasure to respond! All the best- Adrian.

[New, From Apple!]

I guess you had to have seen the original

It didn't seem that great to me.

there's nothing speacially wrong with it, the animation, art and sound are ok, but it just didn't seem that interesting or anything.

[BPA 101]

Unusual and good

Good art
OK text
Good info

I think the references should be explained. What is BPA? Perhaps it could do with some links.
I was interested in the two colour shades, what was the significance of that?
I think it could be more impressive if you put the sequence into a little scene- a kind of context- at the end, with a cause, sound and a background so that we can fully appreciate how what we have seen relates to 'real' animation. If you feel like brushing up the text PM me and I will proof read it for you.
Yes, do more.
Ice

stikkilla responds:

um, I did explain BPA..

[Theory of Evolution]

Very Good

Funny
Interesting
good art and animation

kinda weird

The square person in me felt frustrated when it went away from the truth more as time went on- the other part of me said WTF!

got a few spelling mistakes in there.

[Under Turbulence-ShorterV]

Its not finished...

... so imo it doesn't belong here. It belongs in the alphas.
My constructve advice is to put it in the Alphas, like I do, and finish it- As Tom warns you in the submission notes.

[capten obvious]

Ok but limited

Its not great but its all right. Its mildly funny all through. It could do with an actual punchline, but yeah I suppose.

I had to play it again to read the sublim message.

If you could think of some slightly more punchy humour beyond the basic "This is all obvious" situation you could make a silly little series out of it.

[the warrior by egg82]

Belongs in the alphas...

Tom warns you not to submit incomplete work.

My constructive advice is to submit it to the alphas and not here until it is complete.

We get piles of this stuff all the time with all the promises to complete-; we waste our time and it never is complete.

egg82 responds:

ok irst, wher's the alphas, and second, this will be fnishd. Although i thoroughly didn't expect it to make it. Wierd eh? So instead of resubmitting a better one i'll just add on to it.