IceDragon64's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Drunk Science]

Great!

What great fun! How familiar the reasoning/tone of the drunk people.

My favourite line is "This has to stop" It is SO what the drunk say the morning after. It is followed by "I won't ever..." two days later. "I won't for a long time... two days after that, then "I don't know, maybe..." on Thursday and "Yay! What the hell, just one more time "on Friday.

All of which leads me to the conclusion that Drunk Science is going to be an EPIC SERIES of punchy, hasty comedy which will bring you fame and fortune and NG lots more viewers.

If you are looking for suggestions PM me, I will find you a pile from the Dragons & Spirits.

Drunk Science!!!

[The Chase(JacX)]

Hey!

Its quite good!

I thought no sound, stickman, crappy text = Bl@m

and then...

...it all developed- appropriate music, funny ideas; funny images; proper sound credit, and replay button.
Obviously some sound at the beginning and speach instead of text would make it much better, but you know that! I am surprised you didn't have an explosion sound, that is so simple- if you know how to add sound. Make the He into lower case, unless you think He is God.

Keep going, keep improving

[Language Confusion]

basic

but slightly amusing. It is a good message. Perhaps you might do a little language tutorial, and teach us a few words of the major languages. You might do a little language documentary and tell us more about these languages and where/who speaks them.

I hope you will develop your flash skills to involve things like walking. Did you do all of it, including the singing- if so, say so in the credits.

Needs a replay button

[zombies at the drive thru]

Its pretty crappy...

... and then all of a sudden, its not!

The art/animation is pretty basic but there is nothing really wrong with it. The voices are hideously room-sounding if you know what I mean and the braiiin thing sounds lame, then suddenly it all comes together as funny.

Isn't it interesting how different people experience the same thing and feel so differently about it!

[Jobber short.]

vaguely interesting

It kinda works, though it doesn't make much sense. I assume you are just trying out things you can do. As an exercise in your abilities, I imagine you might be quite satisfied, but as something for an oursider to watch, it comes across to me as fairly pointless. I keep expecting something to happen, to follow as consequence and it doesn't.

Replay button is a Newgrounds essential and SO easy. You will want people to be encouraged to replay your work and explore it; to see the subtle things they may have missed first time, so make a big bold inviting replay button every time!

dangerteeth responds:

I was mostly just throwing things in there that were required for the assignment. I had a much more cohesive idea, but figuring out a walk cycle and using the bone tool for the first time got the better part of my time. Haven't learned the code for a replay button yet but when I do I'll be sure to include it. For now I guess F5 will have to do.
Thanks for the feedback!

[Important Croc Crowd News]

Good Luck!

I can't say the idea is remotely original, neither is the overall quality anything great, but its OK; it has the basics.

As a Dragon & Spirit, I welcome y'all to Newgrounds and hope your new group prospers. If you submit worthy movies with a bit of originality, then I will support you, if not...

You really need subtitles when you use Speakonia, as by the time it is actually being heard on NG it is difficult to understand. Also, hand written words are always messy, it is so easy to use text on Flash I recommend it.

As a Wikigrounder, I will add your group to the List of Crews.

Please do try and create your own identity with the realms of Ock. It gets SOOOO samey. Who are the Croc Crowd? What do they do?

[The Tree Knows]

6/10

For a movie with no sound and no colour? Amazing!

Its funny and it has a great message. Art is good, so is animation.

Loved his expresssions.
Could be better with sound & Colour, but its good as it is.

[16 Stars (B-Day Present)]

Not bad

fun, sweet. Nice present. Hope she liked it!

Looked OK, sounded OK. I am not a great lover of sprite movies but this was well enough executed and I do like proper credits.

Nothing I would particularly change

ifureadthisdie responds:

Thanks for your honest opinion.

[Luger - Time Trials #2]

meh

Its pretty dull and pointless, but I've seen a lot worse. I couldn't hear all the words, but I suspect that is a good thing.
I was faintly amused by the whole potato dancing thing annoying the others, but we need some more gags.

I gave you 4 to say sorry for the first time, but nah, its not really worth much is it?

Please do have a go at something really funny and interesting, I really would like to back you guys a bit. Maybe the time in your time trials needs to be more than 2 minutes!

[[LU] - 500 Miles]

Yep

I could -just- leave a review without lowering your score!

ITs very basic, of course and goes on too long, but I like the music. This idea is very old hat and I think most people will have left before they got to the punchline. You could have fun putting in little bits and pieces in the background to keep things going. Create your own LL culture with your own lore.

I thought the Notes were quite interesting, despite not being relevent.

SoupLuger responds:

no |