Good
I liked it.
Somehow I just felt the images were fitting for the music.
Its not great or anything but I wouldn't change it.
Good
I liked it.
Somehow I just felt the images were fitting for the music.
Its not great or anything but I wouldn't change it.
Ok
+OK Sound
+Ok Mini story
-limited animation
-dodgy lip-sync.
Good work but not much to it
the word 'and' is doubled somewhere in there.
Point?- who cares! it was great
Yay!
what happens next?
Please.
Thank you
Good
+As an writer as well as a Flash author I understand this. I liked some of the humourous ideas and details, like the sprite talking only in text and the first time the ball hit him.
The animation wasn't great, but it was OK.
The text was poor. It needs checking through for spelling, grammar etc.
If you want I could go through the whole lot in detail for a tiny mention in the credits!
The sound quality of the voice acting was poor except the girl, who sounded fine. cc's sound quality was the worst. I think the voices were ok, just the quality.
Best wishes,
Ice Dragon64 of the Dragons & Spirits
OK/Good
I thought the song and singing were good, but I didn't like the instrumentation much. It sounded like plonking about with a keyboard to me.
The visuals were OK, not great, but the somehow the fun moment when the stream of guitars crossed space just tipped it from 5/10 2/5 in 6/10 3/51
If its really all your own work then you have good all-round talent. Not many people produce a video for their own songs, and the music too!
However, the singing and writing are better than the rest, so to do just to the singing, take your success today (I assume it will pass judgement) and collaborate. Its good.
Good
I dont like this genre much and I don't like the lack of sounds, but there is a proper story and some good 3D style images in it.
English not too bad but heres a list of small points in the order I found them through the story:
mushroom kingdom/Mushroom Kingdom; heavensa ; pease/please
saftey/safety; bowser/Bowser (often) realy/really; toad/toad
stopto.
You might get better scores if you tell us more in your notes. Then those that don't like sprite type movies etc will be more inclined to avoid it, leaving you with more of the people who like this kind of thing. Personally, I view anything anyway and judge as I see. 6/10 is a good score from me for the genre.
Ice
Rtils work dragged down by the rest
Rtil produced a destintive, atmospheric story. the grphic style isn't specially my taste, but I recognise talent when I see it and it had a 'film noir' style I admired.
Talyor Bortners started OK but the pointless foul text ruined it for me.
The rest were just a mish-mash of friends getting in on the act or something.
Perhaps if this company was at all familiar to us, it might help the rest of the world to appreciate this.
i guess the british dont know anything about looking sharp in suits????
OK, but too slow.
Long pauses make it boring. Just maybe tweek the whole thing by 10% or so.
It would be better if we got a look at WadeGrounds. It would definately make it funnier. Take a look at Wade's flash. A whole row of girlie undresses would get pretty lame after a bit! anything else which might go on in his office to suggest humourously why Wadegrounds would be lame could look good. Maybe autocratic banning and sacking of good people would be Wades traditional humourous image on NG.
Yes I know, I had originally made a wadegrounds.com, but the dude who looks like a terrorist wouldn't let me look at the monitor. sry. Your comments will be used to improve the next one.
Was in the Dragon & Spirit Alliance. My DS Halloween & Christmas Quizzes are in the 2006 Collections. I was the main organiser on Wikigrounds, though I don't spend much time either there or here these days. I was a writer in the Monthly Writing and VACcom
Age 61, Male
Writer
London, UK
Joined on 9/29/05