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Tetris. Good. Yes.

It had some style and atmosphere to it. I wish I could pin point suggestions to make it still better. Usually I dislike your lack of background but this time its OK. Its all a sort of dreamlike thing. what was the red towel thing in the backgorund that appeared and disappeared? Perhaps its just me being stupid...?
We are working on a Teris project. I hope ours is as good.

Jimtopia responds:

Can't wait to see it. As long as you don't copy my plotline, lol.

As you may realise by now...

...I am exploring all your Flash to see what you do. My coments are the same as Joltmasta. From what I see of the Brackenwood alpha you've come on a lot since this. I sincerely hope so if you are serious about the project!
I loved the song. I might make a little educational using that song!

Jimtopia responds:

It's been months since anyone has reviewed this toon. Wow, thx.

Sorry, I can't offer much for this.

There's nothing much to it, although I agree with you, MANY worse things have got through!
If you had just done a bit better lip sync or more going on I might have 'passed' it.
Best Wishes,
Ice

Jimtopia responds:

Well, thx for an honest review, the thing is, their isn't supposed to be much to it, and the lipsyncing is supposed to be off.
Thx anyway.

Whilst I know this is Crunk fo' Shuggle...

... whatever that means, I see what you meant about difficult to understand. since this is an important flash you should think about expressing it a bit differently- working on it to make the story go better. You surely know that subs shouldn't rely on explantions in the notes.
Its good, its got good music.
I would make the sky lighten toward the horizon in all the scenes, I think it looks better. Take a look at mine if you like and see what you think.
Best wishes,
Ice

Jimtopia responds:

I was thinkin' about redoing this one, but not anytime in the near future. I'm glad you think it's good. Hmm, so make the sky get lighter towards the horizon? Aight. Thx for the review.

It would help if it had english subtitles but...

... its your choice. I don't think people should rudely blam it just because its not in english.

It obviously has art, animation, story etc, so I pass it even though I don't fully understand it

Very Good

Great Work; lots of potential.

in the credits:
the voice of Bragi is -courtesely? - no such word!

I look forward to more of this.

Yay!

(Moo not mo)

otherwise Yay!

MarcyVF responds:

Thanks 4 reviewing! haha! ok "moo" XD

Good

I liked it.

Somehow I just felt the images were fitting for the music.

Its not great or anything but I wouldn't change it.

Ok

+OK Sound
+Ok Mini story

-limited animation
-dodgy lip-sync.

Good work but not much to it

the word 'and' is doubled somewhere in there.

Was in the Dragon & Spirit Alliance. My DS Halloween & Christmas Quizzes are in the 2006 Collections. I was the main organiser on Wikigrounds, though I don't spend much time either there or here these days. I was a writer in the Monthly Writing and VACcom

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