IceDragon64's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Tale of a Serpent]

i dont have anything special to say but...

I thought I had better improve you review score- To most people 'Awesome flash' does not equate to 3/10! The sytstem does that sometimes- you click on a number, then it chages after if you dont click off it properly.

Its good

[Bobby Lee:Southwest Ninja]

It funny

The animation is fine; the art is basic, but OK. The images follow the story well. I liked the ninja in the baggage locker.
The flash had a few little details I liked, like the silly moment with the fat ninja.
Obviously, the ideas were not original and you didn't put in any sounds of your own but thats OK. It did the job- so long as you give credit where its due, which you did its all fine.
all I would say is clip the end off the sound. Stop where he says -
You miss..." clip off the bit "I'm japane...

I dont get some reviewers, the score they give you bears no relationship to what they say- like when someone says your funny then gives you 0 for humour! Strange.
Best Wishes,
Ice

[School Question]

I am the Saviour!

...and in the proper tradition of NewGrounds, since I am the saviour I shall review it!

The graphics are cool, although the animation of the teacher speaking is not up to the standard of the rest.

The music is excellant!

The subject is weird and it didn't make much sense, but I kinda liked it anyway.

I wish the author got to see the video when your flash is protected cos its really great and it would be great for us to have that to see the moment you know your through- don't you think?

[666UpYours]

Intriguing but...

...as it is- not enough.

The story should be in the Flash not the notes. We need the credits in there too.

this has great potential.

Sir-CannabisClock responds:

I created the story when someone bugged me that this loop "needed a story or something".

[Vault]

Bizzarre, some nice touches

Despite its simplicity it has a few moments, like the effect of the misty cabinet and the glimpse of the clear bottles as he opens it. I know its just a question of alpha, but it looked good.
As I put to gether all the details in your various submissions I can see that you know your stuff. Lets hope you can get it all together for the great one to come!
I take it Jim is rich if he takes no change from $100! Maybe that will be you one day!
Nice choice of music again. Sorry 6/10 isn't much for sound, but I rarely give more for only music.
Best Wishes,
Ice

Jimtopia responds:

Thx for an honest review, yes, Jim is rich, if you go to my site and watch "The Lottery" it'll explain everything.

[Tetris Unleashed 2]

I Like it!

Good work. Do more. I agree with MMD. Some good images.

although generally like your choice of music, you should consider other sounds as well. If you get the volume balance right it can be very good and enhance a movie a lot.
spelling:
peices/pieces
caffiene/caffeine
Best Wishes,
Ice

Jimtopia responds:

Thx for reviewing ice.

[Tetris Unleashed]

Tetris. Good. Yes.

It had some style and atmosphere to it. I wish I could pin point suggestions to make it still better. Usually I dislike your lack of background but this time its OK. Its all a sort of dreamlike thing. what was the red towel thing in the backgorund that appeared and disappeared? Perhaps its just me being stupid...?
We are working on a Teris project. I hope ours is as good.

Jimtopia responds:

Can't wait to see it. As long as you don't copy my plotline, lol.

[Stuck in the Desert]

As you may realise by now...

...I am exploring all your Flash to see what you do. My coments are the same as Joltmasta. From what I see of the Brackenwood alpha you've come on a lot since this. I sincerely hope so if you are serious about the project!
I loved the song. I might make a little educational using that song!

Jimtopia responds:

It's been months since anyone has reviewed this toon. Wow, thx.

[JimSpin]

Sorry, I can't offer much for this.

There's nothing much to it, although I agree with you, MANY worse things have got through!
If you had just done a bit better lip sync or more going on I might have 'passed' it.
Best Wishes,
Ice

Jimtopia responds:

Well, thx for an honest review, the thing is, their isn't supposed to be much to it, and the lipsyncing is supposed to be off.
Thx anyway.

[Jim: His Hidden Life]

Whilst I know this is Crunk fo' Shuggle...

... whatever that means, I see what you meant about difficult to understand. since this is an important flash you should think about expressing it a bit differently- working on it to make the story go better. You surely know that subs shouldn't rely on explantions in the notes.
Its good, its got good music.
I would make the sky lighten toward the horizon in all the scenes, I think it looks better. Take a look at mine if you like and see what you think.
Best wishes,
Ice

Jimtopia responds:

I was thinkin' about redoing this one, but not anytime in the near future. I'm glad you think it's good. Hmm, so make the sky get lighter towards the horizon? Aight. Thx for the review.