borderline
Collabs or always difficult to vote/review and this was a real challenge. Most of it is just scribly stuff but it was a bit funny. I would say no 5 was the best and just carried it into protect.
It was generally better than most multi-movie collabs, not relying on things like scribbled blood and pathetic sex scenes to try and carry it through. It generally had a reasonably sound.
Best wishes for your NoobDay from the Dragons & Spirits
IceDragon64
Hehe. Happy n00bday. Even though it's over. :P
It was OK
I don't like most claymation cos they are usually too dark, to short, to much like each other and too crappy. This is I reasonable attempt at expressing A v A in claymation form.
You captured the idea of the animator trying repeated attempts to destroy the animation and the sight was a good idea.
I didn't understand the dark character at the end and I think that spoilt it.
I dont know why claymators don't use sounds- if you did this would be SO much better. Please seriously consider doing that to this, preferably removing the music, to be more like the original.
Please DO work on this, dont just leave it whether it gets through or not- its a good idea and its worth working on. Study the original over and over again and write notes on how you can make a detailed, funny parody of it. Make it more like a flash movie instead of a claymation with a white background instead of whatever happens to be in the room extend it a bit- AvA is quite long- put in scene select- ask the author if there is anything he would like you to try, then do proper credits.
Best Wishes, IceDragon64 of the Dragons & Spirits
Thankyou, i like long reviews. Better than someone posting
"OMG LIKE BLAM ITTTT"
or
"dat woz rate funeh liek"
Thankie!
Its 'Worse things'! LOL
Other wise its a good little story.
I imagine not everyone will know the expression, certainly not those form other countries. It will be interesting to see the reviews.
Maybe you might put in a little text at the end "As they say... worse things happen at see.
And credits, always credits, even if its just "all by me"
Its good. I liked it
Borderline 2 or 3/5
+ some good images
+sounds
+atmosphere
+sort of story
-animation basic
-didn't make much sense it looked as if a ghost/zombie visited him in his cell and left a bloody knife on the floor with which he shot himself???? I did replay but I still don't get it.
I gave you 3/5 because it was thought provoking and had skill.
its crap but its OK...
...if you see what I mean!
+Random can be good, and this is random
+sort of story
+animation/graphics adequate to tell the story, with backgrounds etc.
+surprisingly the spelling/english is OK
+ the 'serious' moment in Austria was funny
+voices funny
+proper credits
-not much of a story, doesnt make sense
-very hard to hear
-ugly, scribbly graphics
-no sounds apart from the voices and music
Do More Do more!
Welcome to my brain, and you WILL see more of it.
Good graphics
If you put these graphics into something with a good story, you could really make it here.
As it is I kinda got bored looking at bits.
nice music
i dont have anything special to say but...
I thought I had better improve you review score- To most people 'Awesome flash' does not equate to 3/10! The sytstem does that sometimes- you click on a number, then it chages after if you dont click off it properly.
Its good
It funny
The animation is fine; the art is basic, but OK. The images follow the story well. I liked the ninja in the baggage locker.
The flash had a few little details I liked, like the silly moment with the fat ninja.
Obviously, the ideas were not original and you didn't put in any sounds of your own but thats OK. It did the job- so long as you give credit where its due, which you did its all fine.
all I would say is clip the end off the sound. Stop where he says -
You miss..." clip off the bit "I'm japane...
I dont get some reviewers, the score they give you bears no relationship to what they say- like when someone says your funny then gives you 0 for humour! Strange.
Best Wishes,
Ice
I am the Saviour!
...and in the proper tradition of NewGrounds, since I am the saviour I shall review it!
The graphics are cool, although the animation of the teacher speaking is not up to the standard of the rest.
The music is excellant!
The subject is weird and it didn't make much sense, but I kinda liked it anyway.
I wish the author got to see the video when your flash is protected cos its really great and it would be great for us to have that to see the moment you know your through- don't you think?
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