Pretty Good
I decided to come and find out a bit about you. I will study your work more. The images were good. Good atmosphere. bomb cloud could have been better.
Pretty Good
I decided to come and find out a bit about you. I will study your work more. The images were good. Good atmosphere. bomb cloud could have been better.
Yeah, clouds are something I'm not that great at.
If you just made the clock work...
...then it would be an animation. then it would belong here on NG!
Its quite a good picture, I suppose. Bold and bright, like clocks are supposed to be.
Best Wishes from the Dragons & Spirits
OK, but fairly basic
I fail to see that this proves very much, if that is what it was supposed to do. There is nothing specially wrong with it, but there isn't much to it really. It night have had a decent picture of the Key, for example and it might have told us what the key actually did.
Best wishes, to the Lock Legion anyway
very good
Very neatly done etc but not very original. It does take 'stickman escaping tetris blocks' a bit further, but not that much. No real story to it, nothing to give personality or make the viewer care what happens much. I know this kind of thing takes a lot of work, but its a long way away from "excellant- 5/5 10/10" to me.
Zooming in on a face, for example, looking up at the falling blocks, with a drop of sweat, would make a LOT of difference to the sense of story and meaning.
I like that last suggestion.
borderline
slow. not much point really. Animation art/not too bad. Liked the image of the character coming toward the 'camera', which tipped the balance into 4/10
simple and effective!
It does the job and its a job that should be done :)
Thanks :)
hmmmm slide shows
I am not into them generally. However, this is a bit of fun and there is a nice big collection of pics to see. Its not what NG is for imo, altough I suppose if Tom makes it, it is!
Nothing wrong with it.
HAHaHA!
I liked it! Made me smile- replayed three times. Funny animation style with scribbles etc somehow worked well. The simple movements were effective, the timing worked. Yeah.
My sound isn't working at the moment, so I haven't been on lately, certainly not revieing, but this one worked so well on silent, I saved it and 7/10!
mostly messy
However, I kinda like the background to your menu.
Have only just found you guys. Are you still going? If so welcome to the Portal from the Dragons & Spirits.
Very good
Lots of good points. Story/funny subject; originality; animation of sock- expression, rolling etc; sound/music pace/timing. Its all good.
Yeah! Thanks as always
Was in the Dragon & Spirit Alliance. My DS Halloween & Christmas Quizzes are in the 2006 Collections. I was the main organiser on Wikigrounds, though I don't spend much time either there or here these days. I was a writer in the Monthly Writing and VACcom
Age 60, Male
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London, UK
Joined on 9/29/05