Not much to it
Previews belong in the alpha section. This section is where movies are judged for possibly keeping forever on NG. This is just a scrap and nothing at all original.
Not much to it
Previews belong in the alpha section. This section is where movies are judged for possibly keeping forever on NG. This is just a scrap and nothing at all original.
Yes
Its OK. Its not great or anything , but its mildly funny and neatly done.
Nothing in particulary I would change.
good
Good stuff, some nice angles and 3d style animation turns. Never heard of the FF.
Not bad
Quite good graphics in that bullet-in and -out bit.
Don't think much of the message. As far as I have even seen, Wade doesn't hate any Krews as such, he only reacts to specific submissions, authors, users and BBS messages, that in his opinion break rules or get personal. I am sorry if you really think otherwise.
Best Wishes to your Krew from ours.
IceD of the D&S
He actually deleted my alt for no reason. I wasn't posting on the bbs through a ban, I wasn't trying to sneak past a portal ban, and I wasn't proxying it or anything. He just deleted it. I actually tried pretty hard to NOT break any rules, and he still deletes me.
Pretty Good
I decided to come and find out a bit about you. I will study your work more. The images were good. Good atmosphere. bomb cloud could have been better.
Yeah, clouds are something I'm not that great at.
If you just made the clock work...
...then it would be an animation. then it would belong here on NG!
Its quite a good picture, I suppose. Bold and bright, like clocks are supposed to be.
Best Wishes from the Dragons & Spirits
OK, but fairly basic
I fail to see that this proves very much, if that is what it was supposed to do. There is nothing specially wrong with it, but there isn't much to it really. It night have had a decent picture of the Key, for example and it might have told us what the key actually did.
Best wishes, to the Lock Legion anyway
very good
Very neatly done etc but not very original. It does take 'stickman escaping tetris blocks' a bit further, but not that much. No real story to it, nothing to give personality or make the viewer care what happens much. I know this kind of thing takes a lot of work, but its a long way away from "excellant- 5/5 10/10" to me.
Zooming in on a face, for example, looking up at the falling blocks, with a drop of sweat, would make a LOT of difference to the sense of story and meaning.
I like that last suggestion.
borderline
slow. not much point really. Animation art/not too bad. Liked the image of the character coming toward the 'camera', which tipped the balance into 4/10
simple and effective!
It does the job and its a job that should be done :)
Thanks :)
Was in the Dragon & Spirit Alliance. My DS Halloween & Christmas Quizzes are in the 2006 Collections. I am the main organiser on Wikigrounds, though I don't spend much time either there or here these days. I am a writer in the Monthly Writing and VACcomps
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