IceDragon64's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[DBZ- Funny Vegeta Death]

very basic...

... but I've seen much worse. Its got animation, background, a glimpse of story, humour. Its only supposed to be a joke and it is mildly funny.

the animation is crude, but it works. the Vegeta characters movement is too slow and it uses Flashes own explosion thing - which always looks rubbish, but you will learn, I'm sure. Try and learn to use a bit more FBF.

[The balloons boy]

borderline

its pretty basic and scribbly, but its got the basics, its topical and its vaguely funny.
Credits?

flashanimator21 responds:

Thanks im pretty new to animating so thanks

[Experiment1]

not too bad

Quite a smooth, gruesome little thing, but there really isn't much to it. Soem kind of story, explanation, background etc would make it more worthwhile, but as it is its just an experiment, not a submission for NG in my oppinion.

[Mini animation: colors]

hmm

Although theres nothing specifically wrong with this animation it really has little to it. If something is just a bit of practice, then why submit it to NG? You do your experiments and practice, then you put together something interesting, entertaining and complete for us, then we let it stay.

[teh alfabet]

Its OK

Its mildly amusing. Not much to it but yeah, s'pose.

You put together a nice little collection of letters etc with a bit of subtlety in there somewhere. I kinda expected it was going to stop at B and was pleased to see it go on!

Funky F!

[Horse Play X3]

work in progress?

I can see that these horses look quite good and they have nice limbs for you to make something with. They clearly have potential, but what you have actually created has no appeal to me at all. Basically it looks like you are just experimenting with something and what we see here is not, in my opinion at all ready to be submitted as a complete submission for our entertainment and judgement.
Needs background, story, sortiing out movement into something smooth and realistic.

TreeckotheFreacko responds:

Sorry, it was complete and nice, but when I was exporting it into a Flash, It glitched hard-core........

[Mario vs Question box]

its OK for a first

simple. not very original- so many people doing little things with Mario. Nothing really wrong with it.

[Cig Will Kill You]

great message!

put across very simply! Looks OK.

Lselby01 responds:

thanks for the review! :D