OK not too bad
---Obviously its not a very original idea- even the symbol on the face is not new- the Blocked Band looked just like that and they even had a Blocked Bomb in thier tiny lineup.
+However, its obviously a more exciting and interesting first sub than a screen with no animation, so lets see...
+It all looked OK- standard Ock stuff, I thought the Angry guy was kinda funny - it expresses the predictable reaction of a lot of people to yet another Ock-style Crew quite well. The crew room looked good, but you did nothing with it- lame. Do something with it!
I hope you make something ORIGINAL and have some ideas to create your own identity. I also hope that in addition to the TT stuff in which people submit crap that woudl never get through on its own, you actually do some good stuff as well. If you want ideas, PM me. I write ideas for a lot of people.
Welcome to the Portal from the Dragons & Spirits :)