Good
Continue to develop the Soup theme. Its interesting.
Its got good art, animation and OK sound.
I was dissappointed with the very end. I realise that you were going for a noir film, but still...
I would hope to see a more powerful and exciting transformation as the soup becomes a living Soup character. Why does he look so miserable, when being a Soup is surely so wonderful?
Please consider changing this as it could be so much better.
Go Soups!