Sorry
but why would we want to watch this?
Although I can see effort went into it, I don't find it at all entertaining/interesting. I can't understand what is going on.
As you learn Flash you will create a lot of experiments that might get a smile from your friends, but don't get a bad rep by submitting them all here.
Use colour, sound and backgrounds, the return. Your art/animation ability is all there waiting to be used for something complete and meaningful. See you when you are ready.
I like it!
I like the images, sounds, music and humour. You get the build up of twitch and situation just fine.
You have the Madness style posters, which are a challenge to read, but you add some great expressions.
I couldn't imagine how a mothers day animation could be called this and still be an appropriate present, but it is. Only for mother.
"Don't kill anyone today" HAHAHA!
YOUR having sleepless nights?
What about US?!
Wierd and horible, but well done. Good art, animation, music etc. Strange creatures.
I have to go to bed now. But what if theives come in the night? !!
I wouldn't change anything, its all good.
hahaha Thank you.... I think. Yes, Thank you. I appreciate the review.
Great idea!
This is probably the scriblliest movie I have ever 4/5'd
It all entertaining though and Iiked the File Fact with the link sad but funny.
the idea of a world of files is not entirely unique, but giving them different roles and personalities was entertaining. Look forward to the sequal.
Good
Its entertaining and has some good sets and stuff. The voices are rather hard to hear and I don't know if I really followed everything that was going on, but yeah, its cool.
It has some good details, like the arm crawling along with the trail of blood.
Shame you spelt the submission wrong.
Haha thanks for pointing that out, the reason it is a little hard to follow is because we had to leave out on filming some scenes to deadline issues for class. The audio is bad because we had to sacrifice it to get under 10 MBs.
Like it
Sound, art, animation, music, story/humour all OK.
You could use a bit of colour, but I suppose it doesn't really matter. Its all OK.
yes but...
Why upload it now then?
Why dump this on us now, when it is almost completely incomprehensible?
It has good material- images, such as the first images with the crysanth in hand etc., then the opening eyes. Good art, good animation but pointless until backed by proper sounds or some way of explaining what is going on.
Come back with the update soon; I look forward to it, but I don't appreciate this being submitted unfinished.
nearly all good
Suitable music matching a traditional 50's cartoon style. Good art and animation and a funny little story.
The one thing that spoilt it for me was the blank screen after the Easter message where one would expect to see credits.
Looks OK
+Good images and text- Important message, worth saying.
-No sound, with suitable sound/music I would rate this much higher- I usually bl@m soundless movies.
-Some spelling mistakes, such as Bullyig at the beginning and Envey at the end
-Needs credits and stop/replay
You have ability, use the forums and the tutorial collection to improve.
kinda weird!
Very good art, sound, story etc.
The animation is not the greatest and the lip sync is relatively crude, but its entertaining and strangly blue.
I found it hard to hear some of what they said, especially near the beginning, but I got the hang of it as we went along. I was a bit shocked at the apparent dark ending and dissappointed at what appeared to be an NG cop-out ending, until the story suddenly moved on. I don't quite understand that bit, I suppose it was some kind of dream/nightmare fantasy thing, tho who was dreaming it was not clear to me.
I sense that you enjoyed making this and I will catch some more episodes.
thanks for the comments. it was the ninja's fantasy. it zoomed into her eyes. she's the bodyguard of the big boss, and all she thinks about is killing basically.
yeah, the lip sync is kinda weird. we use toon boom and the lip sync could do with some improvements.
please do check out the other episodes. thanks again.
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