Ha!
Its OK. sound good, art OK, liked the lip sync. and the crestfallen dragon. It shows what can be done with simple techniques if we try.
None of us dragons eat people, though maybe some people deserve to be eaten!
Ha!
Its OK. sound good, art OK, liked the lip sync. and the crestfallen dragon. It shows what can be done with simple techniques if we try.
None of us dragons eat people, though maybe some people deserve to be eaten!
I always love your reviews Ice.
Nice
Looks good, nice effects, well narated with clear and appealing voice. Animation simple, but OK. Art quite good.
I didn't entirely understand the story, but I got the general idea. Peace will come.
Live long and prosper!
Like it
Very good art, story & sound. OK music
Animation so-so- There is nothing actually wrong with what is there, but the avoidance of animation gets a bit tiresome in a movie of this level.
The dialogue is mildly amusing and different. I am glad to have the detailed explanation that is in the notes, but really the movie should stand alone, without needing notes to explain itself.
I have to say that even after a replay, I had difficulty figuring out who the characters are, exactly, though I suppose that doesn't really matter- I will assume that becomes clearer in future episodes.
The voices are good quality - Though the pirate, although it is clear, has an inconsistant, weird accent- I decided to think of it as part of the humour.
Always good to have subtitles, despite clear speech, thank you. Glad they were well-written.
Lots of potential- I look forward to more.
Always put a replay button at the end.
Don't forget to encourage people to watch early episodes before viewing later ones by putting links in at the beginning. As you create new episodes, put links in the earlier ones so they go direct to the later ones.
Thanks for your extensive feedback, it is very much appreciated.
If it will help, I can sum up the characters in one word.
Naylu - the conspirator
Stradiff - the beatnik
Klyzed - the preacher
Pharris - the gangsta
Ghenter - the snitch
Yori - the goth
And also thanks for giving me the idea of linking this video to earlier episodes. I will get to work on that right away!
Fun
I would prefer something with a little more actual animation, but yeah, SBC stridding roudn the whole world, into SG, into NG; turning everyone into clocks- its quite good
Couldn't make out what Tom was saying, which might have helped, otherwise OK.
"Adrien Brody, Adrien Brody."
Although
...the text is irritatingly slow, at least I could hear it easier than Mushroom.
Not exactly typical Newgrounds. Refreshing, to a point.
Unexpected
Gentle and sensitive is not what I associate with the Socoms. Pleasant music and interesting words, but wierd upside-down image and VERY hard to hear the words.
Loyalty to Newgrounds...
... Means I have waited until now to watch it.
It was worth waiting for. It is everything I could have hopped for. Great fun.
Perhaps a little predictable, though I couldn't really imagine where else you could go with this, except elsewhere on the internet.
If you DO decide to go further I would love to see where you could go with viruses and Wikipedia.
It OK
Not brilliant, but it has a bit of length to it and it is vaguely funny at the end. At least you did get round to something! Hope you will do more.
Its all good
There's nothing really wrong with this- The sounds, art, animation voices etc are everything they need to be and it is funny, especially if you are familiar with SW.
Its a one-scene gag, so it doesn't need much, but it does have some length- a little character creation.
The voices are not always easy to hear, but then they would be hard to hear with all that gear on!
I like it- do more!
You're always too kind, Ice.
Was in the Dragon & Spirit Alliance. My DS Halloween & Christmas Quizzes are in the 2006 Collections. I was the main organiser on Wikigrounds, though I don't spend much time either there or here these days. I was a writer in the Monthly Writing and VACcom
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