I enjoyed the idea of expressing the characters in simplified, but still recognisable form. It ticked all the boxes of story, sound, music etc, so yeah, OK.
I enjoyed the idea of expressing the characters in simplified, but still recognisable form. It ticked all the boxes of story, sound, music etc, so yeah, OK.
Perhaps I am missing some references or something, but it just looks like a pile of snippits of nothing to me. I see it was intended to be funny, but I did not find it to be so. It just about kept my attention enough to watch this "first episode", but you will be glad to hear I won't want to watch another one.
I could see glimpses of some kind of talent-with animation and art and there was nothing wrong with the sound, so it gets a Save, but no real point to it IMO.
Very hard to the hear what the mug is saying, otherwise OK. OK art, lip sync etc.
thanks, i will work on improving my sound quality
+ Nice stuff, looked good, smooth transitions, a bit of fun.
- No music credit
Thank you!
I'm sorry about the lack of music credits. It's mainly because I also made the music.
I couldn't quite follow what was going on despite a replay, but it had a lot going on and a lot of detail. I am not a great Madness fan, but this one definitely had a lot more to it than many out there.
Hmm I kinda smiled at the weirdness and originality of it. For a while I wanted to know what would happen next, but the pace was a bit too slow and whilst it was still quite amusing, I was kinda meh by the end of it. Obviously the animation was crude, but at least it had some.
I liked the voices and hope this is the beginning of something good.
It looks very good, sounds ok- animation spot on. I would have chosen a greater contrast in dance style between 1 and 3, which to me seem similar; there are just so many dance styles out there.
Dance on :)
I did this for a intro of a dance competition and thanks sir for your precious feedback
You have to Replay to catch everything, such as the exact shape of the exit hole! The last word from the man really explains the trauma!
I confess it took me 2 1/2 times through the loop to realise! Its all good. I find the sound you chose for putting the window in funny, as if you could just click it in! The body language is GREAT. The more I look at it, as I type this, the more I see and I just clicked up from 3.5 to 4!
Subtle detail- leaning back carrying glass. The black eye... its all there, with perfectly timed sound etc.
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