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It is barely an animation at all, but you have done the best you can to develop it into something to watch through the video, using the zoom effectively to show the incredible detail of the picture and the sketching as well, which successfully adds interest and motion.

I rarely give as high as 6/10 for something which is basically a picture, but you have shown how appropriate good music etc, can make such a video worth watching.

As for the picture itself, I congratulate the artist. Such action and such detail !
Slightly let down IMO by the archer who doesn't really look like she is actually in a battle at all, unlike her comrades. Perhaps you were intending her to be aloof from the battle etc, but if so, I think that went a bit too far. May I suggest watching archery in motion. Too many films show people, especially women, flicking off arrows like it was effortless. Piercing the enemy for such a slight person would be a real strain, an effort; every moment would be shooting, then straight on to the next arrow, desperately trying to take the monster down before too late.
Her stance also looks a little odd. I don't see how one can bend one leg that much without the other, whilst standing straight-try it!

Lifepoint1 responds:

Thanks a lot for the review! Really appreciate the in-depth comments.

Good stuff. Art very good. animation limited, but good- good timing with the music. The imagery started off very good, then as the drums kicked in, I wasn't so sure the music had the right atmosphere for the "story".
You might think of coming back to this one day for a sequel !

Welcome Back! Pleasant. Enjoyable. All looks and sounds great. Emma's voice is lovely !

Back when something actually Happened in a Foamy :)

I enjoyed the idea of expressing the characters in simplified, but still recognisable form. It ticked all the boxes of story, sound, music etc, so yeah, OK.

Perhaps I am missing some references or something, but it just looks like a pile of snippits of nothing to me. I see it was intended to be funny, but I did not find it to be so. It just about kept my attention enough to watch this "first episode", but you will be glad to hear I won't want to watch another one.
I could see glimpses of some kind of talent-with animation and art and there was nothing wrong with the sound, so it gets a Save, but no real point to it IMO.

Very hard to the hear what the mug is saying, otherwise OK. OK art, lip sync etc.

KhamaLwanda responds:

thanks, i will work on improving my sound quality

Was in the Dragon & Spirit Alliance. My DS Halloween & Christmas Quizzes are in the 2006 Collections. I was the main organiser on Wikigrounds, though I don't spend much time either there or here these days. I was a writer in the Monthly Writing and VACcom

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