IceDragon64's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Noobs your not alone rant]

Yeah!

+ Message. I agree that sometime Flash just doesn't do what it is supposed to. Maybe a lot of the time its me, but no, not always. Sound is my great bugbear. It just doesn't work properly!
+ sound good and clear.
+ Lip sync good, otherwise lackign in animation. The odd movement of the rest of your face would make all the difference- a blink, a smile- anything.

Art Ok, but limited
Otherwise its a bit simple and crude

Emdee-NF responds:

Thanks it was my first time lip synching. I'll try to make a good actual cartoon next time. Good luck on your sound troubles lol

[The underage girl]

Seen worse

Just about passable

+quite good art

- I can't hear all the words- needs subs to get through the difficult bits
- No real animation
-colour
-background
-stop/replay
-credits

keep trying- have a bit of patience and try to put something together with some of the above missing features before you submit again.

[Living Environment]

Quality material

+ great art
+OK animation
+much potential

-Not a complete enough submission to be what I would consider submitting to the Portal
-needs SOUND
-bats wings need to flap- see my two Halloween subs, it makes all the difference. Work on making a complete, entertaining submission with full credits and a stop/replay button. PM me if you have any trouble doing this as your work is worth supporting, tho this submission is not as it is.

[Jurassic Tard]

Credit- Obvious though it is...

... you should actually credit JP etc. with a link etc.

Apart from that its GREAT FUN!

+sound
+Music
+animation
+humour
+art
+everything

"Clever girl!"

[Eggs Rock, Soups Suck!!]

could be better

+ so-so music

- no real art
-no real animation
- rude and offensive to an OK crew
-not funny
-huge filesize for no entertainment value.
-no originality

This gives no encouragement to join the Eggs whatsoever.

taking these basic abilities- animation, sound, art, background etc. you should be able to create something with interest, length, originality etc.

I hope you will reconsider and try creating something interesting and original in the way of a Crew, that I could support.

easterBilly responds:

EGG LEGION FTW!!! SOUP SQUAD SUCK!!!