Poor Wine!
This has some nice artistic touches. I do feel that the 'boing' sound is a little loud/intrusive, but its OK.
Best Wishes to the LL from the DS (Dragons & Spirits)
Poor Wine!
This has some nice artistic touches. I do feel that the 'boing' sound is a little loud/intrusive, but its OK.
Best Wishes to the LL from the DS (Dragons & Spirits)
Thank you for constructive criticism.
good but not great
It has very professional style animation and it is quite entertaining, but there isn't that much to it and it didn't really grab me. Mind you, if I wasn't so full at the moment, I would probably want a waffle by now!
excellant
Its got a whole lot in it, with great style and suitable music. Am I supposed to recognise the dude with the pudding basin haircut in Tom's chair?
not much too it
Didn't seem to do much. It looks like a little scrap you show your friends, not something I would put on NG, but hey- you got through anyway, so I guess people liked it enough.
Pleasant viewing
Smooth, well presented simple stuff. Not much too it and I would have got bored but you knew when to stop.
so-so
vaguely funny. suitably random. spelling not perfect.
Quiz OK
My spelling is and always will be shit.
Which collection do you have in mind?
As usual, it has the Octo small and neat style. Well done on the awards. Look forward to 2nd episode. If you want the DS to review it before submission here, put it in the alphas or devientArt and PM me.
Best Wishes,
Ice
thanks i wil think about it :D
Neat and smooth
Nice piece of work. Smooth action and good looking. good music.
No replay button tho!?!??
The music goes on with nothing happening on the screen which is not ideal. Even if it was just an animation loop it would be better.
I am a Tetris fan and the DS have a Tetris animation which maybe we will finish one day.
thanks ice! yeah maybe i need to put a replay button there.. -.-
Very Good
All looks and sounds very good. Great art, good animation.
Guy creeping up is too loud- he would be heard!
I prefer films with stories to submissions with nothing but action, it leaves me feeling that I don't care what happens.
Very good
Good story, very good art, not very much animation fairly short.
Was in the Dragon & Spirit Alliance. My DS Halloween & Christmas Quizzes are in the 2006 Collections. I am the main organiser on Wikigrounds, though I don't spend much time either there or here these days. I am a writer in the Monthly Writing and VACcomps
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