so-so
vaguely funny. suitably random. spelling not perfect.
Quiz OK
so-so
vaguely funny. suitably random. spelling not perfect.
Quiz OK
My spelling is and always will be shit.
Very Good
All looks and sounds very good. Great art, good animation.
Guy creeping up is too loud- he would be heard!
I prefer films with stories to submissions with nothing but action, it leaves me feeling that I don't care what happens.
Very good
Good story, very good art, not very much animation fairly short.
Yeah, its good
Its all there and its OK. Making better animation of walking and running is the next key stage you need to do. Take a look back at the wolf and you will see what I mean.
Sorry, I only just spotted that Jimi and Hendrix are both spelt wrong. Never mind, its good, and part of a good, entertaining portfolio. I will get the DS to take a look.
Best Wishes,
Ice
Whoops! Good eye. And thanks as always Ice!
Nice and smooth
Nice style, content, message. Hope Carly is OK now.
Thanks for the review.
Not too bad, but...
pretty crude and basic. It needs sound badly. Very little gets through judgement here without any sound at all. just a simple loop of music would be passable.
a bit of real animation, as opposed to having a few characters shift about, would help.
Was in the Dragon & Spirit Alliance. My DS Halloween & Christmas Quizzes are in the 2006 Collections. I was the main organiser on Wikigrounds, though I don't spend much time either there or here these days. I was a writer in the Monthly Writing and VACcom
Age 60, Male
Writer
London, UK
Joined on 9/29/05