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All looks very good

but I don't understand it.

Was that supposed to be a British accent?

Ha Ha Ha!

You have to go and see OxSox's Fairy Future Mother-

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /421207

it is such an amusing comparison. This is very good. It has some lovely details, like the wierd chairs and the bug on his back.
All good art, sound, music.

well yes

its all very good of its type. Stickmen fighting- some good ideas and images; all done properly, I suppose.

Can't say I am very excited about seeing stick men fighting, tho- The better ones usually have some hint of plot, zoom-in or personality in there.

Ace0fredspades responds:

aaaaha

Looks pretty good

As an animation, it doesn't do all that much and there isn't much of what you could call story or personality- it could be said that this is just a little bit of a test/preview or whatever and belongs in the Alphas.
However, it looks good enough, its fairly original and its got good, appropriate music.
Why is the background red? Is it just so that the black ship shows up more?
It might look more menacing if it didn't show up quite so well, maybe a darker background. Perhaps a dark grey background with reddish coloured gas swirls in it.

The credits could do with being a little less bland. - Perhaps more colourful or something. You could put links in it, such as a link to the music credits

NapalmGirl responds:

I liked the red background. Red and black are my fav colorz! ^_^ Plus the red did seem like a good color that would make the ship show up better. Plus it made it seem more ebil as well. The idea about grey might be okay...Dunno if it might be as striking as the red. Gas swirls seem like a neat idea too. Yeah I gotta fix teh credits. Gomen.

~Its OK

its mildly funny and it has a sort of story. I liked the "Not a nuke- Nacho's.
...and yes, some poeple do read all the way to the end, since you asked.

Top story etc.

Well expressed in animation and art.

If that accent is fake its damn good- and I am British. Weird how it parallels Shrek- maybe they somehow got their ideas from YOU- ever thought of that?

Mixed feelings

It has some good art and some very good art and OK sounds/music. The story line is good enough, tho the dialogue isn't great.

However the format with the hands and feet like that is irritating and some of the sounds are a bit basic/crude, tho all are clear enough.

The speaking method- subtitles with buttons- is very basic, tho at least its all clearly written and generally spelt well.

Very Good

Of course I love watching my own basic idea appear (and get praise) but I like all the things that you have done to it- the voices,the story twist, the details:
The mouse, the rolling eyes
"...Horrible vision of the future..." ha ha ha!
The familiar pictures on the wall

I like the blue sky background in the egg catapult scene. It made much more sense- I was vaguely unhappy about it before, but couldn't put it into words.

Now its really good. If you can always make at least this standard for any stories of mine you use, you can do as many as you like!

All that remains is to make the movement more fluid generally and we are really on the way.

OxSox responds:

Hahaha that's my favorite part too!

Was in the Dragon & Spirit Alliance. My DS Halloween & Christmas Quizzes are in the 2006 Collections. I was the main organiser on Wikigrounds, though I don't spend much time either there or here these days. I was a writer in the Monthly Writing and VACcom

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