IceDragon64's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[On The Moon (episode 3)]

Im going through them- best so far

Carapace diagram tipped the balance into 4/5 for me.

[Saving Lily]

Nice

Some very nicely used effects- reflections, breathing, glowing etc.

Nice atmosphere. Nice music.
Went on a bit too long, was getting a bit boring and far-fetched.

Hard to read the last bit of credits.

[Black Sundown]

interesting, skilful

Very good art, good animation. Good sound and music.

It would, of course be much better with voices. It is difficult to follow the story through only sub-titles, especially since the punctuation is not that clear, which makes it difficult to follow and the right hand side fades to dark so the words dissappear.
I didn't entirely follow the story, I think you have it clear in your head, as you explained in the notes, but we should not need the notes to understand it.
For example, the idea of the General and this vengeance arrives from nowhere at the end of the story.
I think you need to work with some more people who DON'T know what is going on as beta testers before submitting.
Its good work. Work on it. I look forward to the sequel

Kumar responds:

yeah it is another thing I'm working on hopefully for the next episode it can go a little slower pace and of course voice acting to add extra animation to it less tweens. That way the vengeance plot will go noticed from frame one.

[New Super Mario Bloopers]

Not much to it.

Three is not much in a set of bloopers, especially Mario bloopers which are two-a -penny anyway. I didn't understand the first one at all and the third was pretty unexciting. that left only the middle one, which was not bad, but could probabbly have used a funnier sound associated with the slide down.
Still, it all worked OK, I suppose, tho the sound wasn't great, as you said. Sorry I can't help you with that.

Nickclick2 responds:

The first one was, you know how E Gadd is a Nerd? Well now, he was a gangster.

["IF"]

All looks very good

but I don't understand it.

Was that supposed to be a British accent?

[End of the Row]

Ha Ha Ha!

You have to go and see OxSox's Fairy Future Mother-

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /421207

it is such an amusing comparison. This is very good. It has some lovely details, like the wierd chairs and the bug on his back.
All good art, sound, music.

[LSCCE]

well yes

its all very good of its type. Stickmen fighting- some good ideas and images; all done properly, I suppose.

Can't say I am very excited about seeing stick men fighting, tho- The better ones usually have some hint of plot, zoom-in or personality in there.

Ace0fredspades responds:

aaaaha

[Rita's Ship]

Looks pretty good

As an animation, it doesn't do all that much and there isn't much of what you could call story or personality- it could be said that this is just a little bit of a test/preview or whatever and belongs in the Alphas.
However, it looks good enough, its fairly original and its got good, appropriate music.
Why is the background red? Is it just so that the black ship shows up more?
It might look more menacing if it didn't show up quite so well, maybe a darker background. Perhaps a dark grey background with reddish coloured gas swirls in it.

The credits could do with being a little less bland. - Perhaps more colourful or something. You could put links in it, such as a link to the music credits

NapalmGirl responds:

I liked the red background. Red and black are my fav colorz! ^_^ Plus the red did seem like a good color that would make the ship show up better. Plus it made it seem more ebil as well. The idea about grey might be okay...Dunno if it might be as striking as the red. Gas swirls seem like a neat idea too. Yeah I gotta fix teh credits. Gomen.

[Against the Colossus]

Good, interesting

but not that much to my taste. Its an interesting animation and art project, to a point, but its quite hard to follow and it has no real story, nor any personality.

[The room lv1]

~Its OK

its mildly funny and it has a sort of story. I liked the "Not a nuke- Nacho's.
...and yes, some poeple do read all the way to the end, since you asked.