Top story etc.
Well expressed in animation and art.
If that accent is fake its damn good- and I am British. Weird how it parallels Shrek- maybe they somehow got their ideas from YOU- ever thought of that?
Top story etc.
Well expressed in animation and art.
If that accent is fake its damn good- and I am British. Weird how it parallels Shrek- maybe they somehow got their ideas from YOU- ever thought of that?
Mixed feelings
It has some good art and some very good art and OK sounds/music. The story line is good enough, tho the dialogue isn't great.
However the format with the hands and feet like that is irritating and some of the sounds are a bit basic/crude, tho all are clear enough.
The speaking method- subtitles with buttons- is very basic, tho at least its all clearly written and generally spelt well.
Very Good
Of course I love watching my own basic idea appear (and get praise) but I like all the things that you have done to it- the voices,the story twist, the details:
The mouse, the rolling eyes
"...Horrible vision of the future..." ha ha ha!
The familiar pictures on the wall
I like the blue sky background in the egg catapult scene. It made much more sense- I was vaguely unhappy about it before, but couldn't put it into words.
Now its really good. If you can always make at least this standard for any stories of mine you use, you can do as many as you like!
All that remains is to make the movement more fluid generally and we are really on the way.
Hahaha that's my favorite part too!
Not too bad
In fact , for a first time its got quite a bit of potential.
the art was good enough and the style was OK.
However, not much gets through without sound, the animation was adequate but not inspiring and the whole thing makes not much sense if one has not heard of the show.
I would support this if it at least had sound. If you need help PM me. You have potential.
Best Wishes
Ice
Yea, sound does indeed make it have more quality. But thank you for advice ^^
wow!
Very good! I am not crazily into FBF swirly things, but this is the best of its kind I have ever seen, so YES.
I was so impressed with the sentiment and the trouble you had gone to that I confess to feeling a momentary pang of irrational jealousy toward the lucky boyfriend!
Its that good.
I will send this to my favourite girl now!
Its all good. timing art, sound quality, everything
I trust you got the biggest hugs on Earth for this. If not chuck him, we love you!
He gave me a swift handshake, and an approving nod.
Funny
Could be SO much better with the right, period adventure music- credited.
Good looking
But not a lot of sense or anything.
Smooth animation such as it is, but not much movement.
Nice sounding music, went well enough with the tone of the animation.
Ive seen worse
There are a few of these things around and this one is rather too flawed. The camera shaked compared to the sticks. The actors "layer" conflicts with the sticks. moving in front and behind them in an unrealistic way. I would only approve of exceptional movies without sound and this isn't one of them.
Movement would be good.
Was in the Dragon & Spirit Alliance. My DS Halloween & Christmas Quizzes are in the 2006 Collections. I was the main organiser on Wikigrounds, though I don't spend much time either there or here these days. I was a writer in the Monthly Writing and VACcom
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