Yeah its good...
but its still not that great, whereas EC 3 really does it for me, its makes it all come to something. Do More! Do more!
Yeah its good...
but its still not that great, whereas EC 3 really does it for me, its makes it all come to something. Do More! Do more!
Good
its not that great of itself, but its a good introduction to the series.
very good
The jittery thing is not to my taste, but other wise its all very good. Wise choice to end at that point.
Could be improved with some mark left on the mask where the cleaver had been.
Oh yeah!
Nice one. very good art animation story etc.
Brilliant authors notes.
Its very good
The length is just fine- ignore them all. Anything more would be just labouring the point!
Haha sick!
Its good. If you listen to my Wedding sub, you can hear me talk in a similar way- the way the Dragons & Spirits actually talk to each other when we are being particularly soppy. Is AL on NG? He should be Co-authored if he did the animation.
its great. The irony of the Sunny D being the worst day af all was brilliant and so like some people!
Al is co-authored now he didn't make an account on NG till afterwe submitted it but really we both worked on this anyways.
Very Good
This is a perfect example of where skill in art is seperate from animation:
the art is very simple, tho adequate, but the animation is very good- smooth, and detailed with subtleties- such as the cat licking itself, expression, drama and good lip sync.
Excellant- severely underated
I am extremetly pleased with the final result and honoured to have a mention in the credits. I wish I had been able to help it soar through judgement in that first day and week, I can hardly believe its score. It deserves to be raised and will be, I am sure.
Thank you for persisting with getting the details right, and thanks to the VA team for helping make it PERFECT after our nit-picking Beta sessions.
Please do keep this one going, I SO want to know what happens next and the mysteries behind it all. Please do not hesitate to contact me if there is the tiniest way I can help you.
However, please sort out the Authors Notes. You have made them a part of the story and you have made Snow rouge instead of rogue!
I will be showing this to the Dragons & Spirits soon.
Yours affectionately,
Ice Dragon64
Was in the Dragon & Spirit Alliance. My DS Halloween & Christmas Quizzes are in the 2006 Collections. I was the main organiser on Wikigrounds, though I don't spend much time either there or here these days. I was a writer in the Monthly Writing and VACcom
Age 60, Male
Writer
London, UK
Joined on 9/29/05