IceDragon64's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[When I'm Running]

Yeah, its good

Its all there and its OK. Making better animation of walking and running is the next key stage you need to do. Take a look back at the wolf and you will see what I mean.
Sorry, I only just spotted that Jimi and Hendrix are both spelt wrong. Never mind, its good, and part of a good, entertaining portfolio. I will get the DS to take a look.
Best Wishes,
Ice

OxSox responds:

Whoops! Good eye. And thanks as always Ice!

[Stop & Stare...]

Nice and smooth

Nice style, content, message. Hope Carly is OK now.

Ticketyt0ck responds:

Thanks for the review.

[Line Rider]

not bad

it works and its mildly funny. The sound is quite good, well timed etc.

This kind of keeps dying parody is very familiar here on NG, but thats OK, people like it. The moments of 3D angle give you the fifth star.

Lots of things you can do to improve it:
more colour
more length
link to info about the game.
go into NG tutorials collection and learn buttons, they are easy.
Go into my Art tutorial if you want some ideas on how to step up a little in art, including buttons and backgrounds.

[Where Are The Stars? v2]

Not too bad, but...

pretty crude and basic. It needs sound badly. Very little gets through judgement here without any sound at all. just a simple loop of music would be passable.
a bit of real animation, as opposed to having a few characters shift about, would help.

[Money (Thats what i want)]

Looked good, worked well

You might add a few sparkles to the piles of coins. Also, maybe credit the music within the flash, including the second version which is in the very end.

[Valhalla Knights 2]

Excellant

Background art exceptional. Other art very good, sound good, story very good.
Some of the animation is not quite as good as the rest, buyt generally its all great.

I didn't like the 'humourous' face transformation when he found the girl- I assume that is one of these anime rituals, but its WAY out of place in this otherwise serious styled animation

[(2004) Glass of water]

So far, its my favourite

I've seen a fair few Knox/Klay and I come back to this one. Your twisted thought, logic is just so weird.
I love the laughing at the badge and the whole dying in a glass of water thing.

[How airsoft guns work]

Needs sound, badly

Otherwise OK. More info would be good.

tsa1 responds:

you know, an airsoft gun doesn't say mutch of a sound, it would look clumsy if i had to but a little stupid sound in to each shot firedm then i think it is better to keep it clean.

[Not Anymore.....]

Not too bad

It s got most of the basics- sound, animation, background etc. However, it is mostly of poor quality and there isn't much to it.

The sound is very rough and hard to hear. You need to practice and redo voices until they are clearer.

The intro thing is very basic, b/w stickmen is SO overdone and common.

I think you have the beginnings of something good, but you are not, in my opinion, ready for submitting to NG.
Please do work on it.

Tolu910 responds:

thanks for the help. ill do better

[The Weapon Collab]

Some nice touches

I 'm not much into stickmen and guns, but I liked the bits of humour and the info.

sirtom93 responds:

Thanks.