IceDragon64's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Money (Thats what i want)]

Looked good, worked well

You might add a few sparkles to the piles of coins. Also, maybe credit the music within the flash, including the second version which is in the very end.

[Valhalla Knights 2]

Excellant

Background art exceptional. Other art very good, sound good, story very good.
Some of the animation is not quite as good as the rest, buyt generally its all great.

I didn't like the 'humourous' face transformation when he found the girl- I assume that is one of these anime rituals, but its WAY out of place in this otherwise serious styled animation

[(2004) Glass of water]

So far, its my favourite

I've seen a fair few Knox/Klay and I come back to this one. Your twisted thought, logic is just so weird.
I love the laughing at the badge and the whole dying in a glass of water thing.

[How airsoft guns work]

Needs sound, badly

Otherwise OK. More info would be good.

tsa1 responds:

you know, an airsoft gun doesn't say mutch of a sound, it would look clumsy if i had to but a little stupid sound in to each shot firedm then i think it is better to keep it clean.

[Not Anymore.....]

Not too bad

It s got most of the basics- sound, animation, background etc. However, it is mostly of poor quality and there isn't much to it.

The sound is very rough and hard to hear. You need to practice and redo voices until they are clearer.

The intro thing is very basic, b/w stickmen is SO overdone and common.

I think you have the beginnings of something good, but you are not, in my opinion, ready for submitting to NG.
Please do work on it.

Tolu910 responds:

thanks for the help. ill do better

[The Weapon Collab]

Some nice touches

I 'm not much into stickmen and guns, but I liked the bits of humour and the info.

sirtom93 responds:

Thanks.

[On The Moon (episode 3)]

Im going through them- best so far

Carapace diagram tipped the balance into 4/5 for me.

[Saving Lily]

Nice

Some very nicely used effects- reflections, breathing, glowing etc.

Nice atmosphere. Nice music.
Went on a bit too long, was getting a bit boring and far-fetched.

Hard to read the last bit of credits.

[Black Sundown]

interesting, skilful

Very good art, good animation. Good sound and music.

It would, of course be much better with voices. It is difficult to follow the story through only sub-titles, especially since the punctuation is not that clear, which makes it difficult to follow and the right hand side fades to dark so the words dissappear.
I didn't entirely follow the story, I think you have it clear in your head, as you explained in the notes, but we should not need the notes to understand it.
For example, the idea of the General and this vengeance arrives from nowhere at the end of the story.
I think you need to work with some more people who DON'T know what is going on as beta testers before submitting.
Its good work. Work on it. I look forward to the sequel

Kumar responds:

yeah it is another thing I'm working on hopefully for the next episode it can go a little slower pace and of course voice acting to add extra animation to it less tweens. That way the vengeance plot will go noticed from frame one.

[New Super Mario Bloopers]

Not much to it.

Three is not much in a set of bloopers, especially Mario bloopers which are two-a -penny anyway. I didn't understand the first one at all and the third was pretty unexciting. that left only the middle one, which was not bad, but could probabbly have used a funnier sound associated with the slide down.
Still, it all worked OK, I suppose, tho the sound wasn't great, as you said. Sorry I can't help you with that.

Nickclick2 responds:

The first one was, you know how E Gadd is a Nerd? Well now, he was a gangster.