IceDragon64's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Don't Provoke Animals]

Not much too it

When you look at the other subs that have been made on this project today, with some real animation, story variety etc, this one does not match up at all well. This would need at least some pictures of a lion eating someone, with a bit of animation and sound, to make me feel it was worth anything.

[Inappropriate Touching]

Good message and funny

Well put together and something worth saying. I wouldnt change any of it.

[Hero WAR Battle of Titans]

So good but...

You gotta correct the spelling, this is now a major series etc.
fihgt/fight 300

criator/creator in English

[CoreyStuckInPurgatory V]

Still no REPLAY button

Of course it's excellant. All the usual stuff I say applies.

Voice acting excellant, though I don't see why the final part after they are thrown out echoes like they are in a school hall.

[CoreyStuckInPurgatory IV]

Excellant yet again! 5'd

All the same crit as before.

Now I have to wait impatiently for more. This episode is a bit too SHORT for my taste.
If you would like me to edit the text for the series in detail, PM me.
Its part of what I do here.

[CoreyStuckInPurgatory III]

excellant again! 5'd

I totally share Tom's enthusiasm for this series.
All the same crit as ep. 1.

I hope Tom makes a Series for this soon.

As first parts lack buttons to take you to the next parts at the end, so the second onward lacks buttons at the beginning taking you to the previous parts first.

FACT- people who are borderline interested, such as statwhores, don't obther to look at previous parts, so encourage them and tip the balance of a fe with BIG buttons. This will improve your Views and indirectly your fan base.
On to the next one...

[CoreyStuckInPurgatory II]

Excellant again! 5'd

Exactly the same crit as the 1st one- all the same good and bad- plus...

Good character development coming now. St Peter, Corey, the hell guy. I'm on my way to the next one.

REPLAY BUTTON! Replay buttons make replays. Replays make more detailed reviews, more reviews and higher review scores in top flight movies.

[CoreyStuckInPurgatory I]

Excellant! 5'd

Top Flight Art
Very good animation
Very good sound
Very good start to story
Very good text, credits etc.- a few tiny details in the sub titles.

NO REPLAY BUTTON!

Should have info about Dantes Inferno in a link to Wikipedia or something.
Should have links to the other parts at end.
Make an end menu while you are at it with all these and any other bits and pieces that real enthusiasts can get into.- web sites, deleted scenes, sketches, scene select etc.
You are in the 4+ range with this series. You will make the top flight by doing everything you can for the people who REALLY like it and will vote and review it to the top.
I viewed this cos Tom linked it in his latest newsletter.

[Zoom Out]

Very good but could be better.

I would like to work on this one with you becuase its SUCH a good idea, the music is a perfect choice and has some good art.
Once we get the Dragon thing right, lets move in on this one and get a score worthy of our joint ability. Simple art improvements could help a lot- the fish eye, the galaxy etc. Keep the PM I sent.

[inspHIGHered]

OK.

The soldier one was MUCH better than all the rest put together. I passed it for that alone. I think I would have given it five stars if you had submitted it alone, whereas with all the drug references and so-so stuff, the sub barely passes.

Not meaning to be funny, but I don't think you really need to tell us that you are an amateur (thats how its spelt) in the notes. You might take that out.

seriously, though, if you want to redo the soldier one, improving it to the best you can and resub on its own as a short, I think you could do better than this score. The idea is worth 3/5 at least with good animation and art.

Pkay responds:

Well thanks for the review. But yes you're right, the soldier one came out by far my favorite and I was really surprised with how well the outcome was. Yeah, some of the others were thrown in with a lot less effort, but I just get really impatient sometimes.